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Into the First Hours of Twilight

. The last tint of orange sunset faded into hints of lilacs and blues trailing the depthless paths of a promising horizon On the glistening sand I lay into the first hours of twilight My eyes reverting from early stars to follow soft gentle ripples of playful waves lapping onto the silent shore The scent of salt~ spray and margeuritas wafted in the air 'Neath the moonglow that seperates our lands ...And I thought of you ...Of your last letter Of every pulse of your heartbeat pouring crimson in a cup of rose-petal water Yes,once more I thought of you like I always do And everything was beautiful and everything went still till the trickling drops of crystal dew welcomed dawn.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/26/2014 4:02:00 PM
Beautiful work. I love the sky you describe. I hope all is well in your world..TAH
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Date: 11/19/2014 2:22:00 PM
truly very beautifully painted charmaine excellent pen dear friend love how you drew this piece
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Date: 11/19/2014 1:14:00 PM
Romance and lovely imagery that lead into the first hours of twilight. In this type of poetry you can never fail...this is the domain where you excel! A top rating! // paul
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Date: 11/19/2014 5:26:00 AM
First Hours Of Twilight, the sister of Dawn. Twilight/A sweet prologue to Night . Loved it Charmaine . Wonderful. Take care XXXXX RAJAT
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Date: 11/18/2014 5:26:00 PM
This poem is simply THE BEST! Your poetry inspires me to strive to become a better poet Charmaine. There is something magical about twilight that is poetic and romantic and I felt that in every lovely line!
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Date: 11/18/2014 11:08:00 AM
What a talented poet you are, my dearest Charmaine! A beautiful, romantic write... you have no equal! Love, Jack XXX
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Date: 11/18/2014 10:46:00 AM
I wonder -- the last letter what did it say . . . his undying love, of keeping you close in the insanity of war, of hope and reunion by the shore . . . "went still" a dreamless sleep of a mutual love -- kissed by the sunrise. Yes, your poem speaks to all of this and more . . .
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Date: 11/18/2014 10:44:00 AM
Beautiful and romantic Charmaine!
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Date: 11/18/2014 8:17:00 AM
This was a refreshing breath of loveliness. What a great way to start my day.
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Date: 11/18/2014 5:45:00 AM
It is beautiful poems like this that makes me want to get better and better and maybe one day make beautiful lines like these.......
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Date: 11/17/2014 6:40:00 PM
You paint with wonderful colors in your words, you always create a masterpiece :)
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Date: 11/17/2014 6:13:00 PM
simply stunning imagery and sooooo romantic and full of hope Charmaine:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/17/2014 6:07:00 PM
How beautiful and romantic Charma...I love the imagery and the longing...hugs Tim
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