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Into the Dark

I am not ready to disembark into the dark amid the cold and the confused the waters there spit down on my soul washing out my way as my conscience cries thru reddened eyes It is not far but it is long and long i do for those simple sounds percolating amongst the warm the comfort, the care pain might disappear I call out to the east begging that fateful breeze if only but it will not and I disembark

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Date: 10/29/2018 4:20:00 AM
I am glad my DeBark poem inspired!!! LOL This reminds me a song I love, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bL4syCuE1CQ
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Date: 10/29/2018 2:01:00 AM
- I wish you bright shining days in the future, Tim - A deep moving poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/29/2018 1:36:00 AM
Into the dark might love be there waiting for you and rain to cleans the surrounding
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Date: 10/28/2018 9:32:00 PM
One never knows...nice write, Tim!
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Date: 10/28/2018 2:39:00 PM
Such deep sad imagery ...hopefully out of the dark and into the light Tim:-) hugs Jan xx
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