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Into the Blue


And in my dream, I am floating into the blue,
            The calm blue water caresses my tranquility;
The vistas are wondrous below the deep misty azure sky,
      And I am drifting toward a tropical secluded island.

And in my dream, I am floating into the blue,
            Submerged above, below, around in splendor;
Then my spirit comes gliding, a lovely white bird hovering,
      Utterly beautiful my island lush with emerald green.

And in my dream, I am floating into the blue,
           Little fish like gems come to kiss my toes with love;
No crashing waves, no sounds, just pure blue stillness,
       In my dream, I am divine and sublime in a blue fantasy.

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January 10, 2016


Poetry/Verse/Into The Blue
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A   Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 9:53 PM
Broken, congrats on your fine win. XOX - LINDA -
La France Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 9:59 PM
Linda, thanks for the congratulations, appreciate
Roper Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 9:50 PM
Broken Wing, great pen , the imagery is beautiful congratulations on your win!
La France Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 12:25 PM
Eve, thanks so much for visiting my poem and for the beautiful ~
A  Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 9:18 PM
Broken, Congrats on your Into The Blue win. ** SKAT **
La France Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 12:25 PM
Thanks
Haight Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 7:46 PM
Congratulations on your win, Broken Wings. Your poem is lovely and filled with dreamy images and fantasy. Hugs, Sandra
La France Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 12:26 PM
Sandra, thanks for visiting my poem and for the lovely and dreamy, appreciate ~
Godwin Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 7:38 PM
So pretty - I love this poem ... CayCay
La France Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 12:27 PM
CayCay, thanks for the love ~
Scars Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 7:02 PM
Broken Wings, congrats on your placement in the contest :) *Smiles*
La France Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 7:14 PM
Laura, thanks for visiting my poem and for the smiles ~
Boddie Avatar
January 11, 2016 at 6:21 PM
into the deep....parts of my mind we meet....these words and my heart....the musing effect starts....the wheel slowly begins to turn....while passion endlessly burns....inspiration has been found....I just Pray I won't let it down....another wow bw....;)
La France Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 8:34 AM
Eric, thank you for the wow, and for the lovely poetic comment, always lovely to have your visit ~
Martin Avatar
January 11, 2016 at 12:06 PM
Beautiful in theme and execution! Very memorable.
La France Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 8:35 AM
Oddly it just came to me while listening to nature music, I do love nature music mingled with classical
La France Avatar
January 11, 2016 at 2:46 PM
Thomas, thank you so much for visiting
Cwiak Avatar
January 11, 2016 at 9:49 AM
Beautifully scripted and total immersion in the theme. Great write...good luck in the contest.
La France Avatar
January 11, 2016 at 2:47 PM
Dan, thank you so much for the nice comment
Spagnola Avatar
January 11, 2016 at 5:41 AM
Wow! You weren't kidding ~ pure, unadulterated, bliss of a read!
La France Avatar
January 11, 2016 at 9:46 AM
Jill, oh I love that word bliss, thank you so much for the wow and for returning to visit, appreciate ~
Shahein Avatar
January 11, 2016 at 2:06 AM
This is mesmerizing , beautiful words,best of luck in the contest, hugs / / :) dalia
La France Avatar
January 11, 2016 at 9:47 AM
Dalia, thanks for the mesmerizing and the beautiful and the hugs !!
Spagnola Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 4:19 PM
Constance, what a sweet one-liner, and I will! :), jill
La France Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 10:44 PM
Jill, lol, one line has become many, please return ~
Sage Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 3:41 PM
will wait by...
La France Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 3:48 PM
Thanks Sage, still working on it, lol...
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