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Into the Blue

I drifted into the endless, blue water, as though I was levitating. I didn't have the taste of the ocean on my tongue, but I could see coral reefs decorating the ocean floor, and a moving spiral of zebra fish paving way for the ever-excited dolphins. I could see all that as I meditated in the silent air, cock-tailed with oriental incense.....

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Date: 3/23/2016 11:50:00 AM
Hi Teddy, an excellent work my friend. There is complete peace within the imagery of your words which dance so delightfully off the tongue. A well crafted wrafted, well written write Teddy. This is deserving of a seven from me my friend. I Love the water, the peace, the simplicity of the work, the wonderful imagery....Vlad.
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Date: 2/27/2016 9:42:00 AM
Vry beautiful imagery written beautifully penned...gl
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Date: 1/25/2016 12:15:00 PM
This is amazing and lovely. Thank you for the incredible share.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/5/2016 6:14:00 AM
Thank you Funom, for enjoying my piece! :-)
Date: 1/19/2016 9:15:00 AM
Great imagery ...Nicely penned....best wishes
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/5/2016 6:12:00 AM
Thank you so much Joseph! :-)
Date: 1/17/2016 7:09:00 AM
beautiful poem
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 1/17/2016 5:30:00 PM
Thank you so much Legend! ;-)
Date: 1/15/2016 11:11:00 PM
This is such a very wonderful piece my dear friend, Ted giving a reader's a sense of calmness and serenity. A tip-top write my dear friend. Best wishes always. Thank you so much for sharing and also for stopping by on my poem! love lots and hugs, Leonora
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 1/17/2016 5:29:00 PM
You are very much welcome, Leonora! *^_^* Thanks again for stopping by, to read and enjoy my work! ;-)
Date: 1/13/2016 10:37:00 AM
Lovely! Sure to top the winners list.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 1/17/2016 5:26:00 PM
Thank you Elaine! ;-)
Date: 1/13/2016 7:58:00 AM
Beautiful poem read from you my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
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Elaine George
Date: 1/13/2016 10:37:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments BL.
Date: 1/11/2016 2:38:00 AM
excellent write Teddy
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 1/13/2016 5:19:00 AM
Thanks White Sage! ;-)
Date: 1/10/2016 12:32:00 PM
Enjoyed your poem, Teddy. To levitate above water would be a good way to go
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 1/10/2016 5:25:00 PM
Sure levitation would be really cool! Thanks David, for enjoying my poem! ;-)
Date: 1/9/2016 5:46:00 PM
This is just so beautiful, Teddy! I love the awesome imagery! best wishes. Pandita
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 1/10/2016 5:23:00 PM
Thank you for enjoying my write Pandita! *^_^*

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