Into Life Man Is Thrust

Once wholly stripped of its crippling inhibitions a mind rummages, unfettered beyond mundane thoughts delving along beveled edges of a pensively distorted mirror as though it sees inside a heart reflections in purest pigments the genuine acumen of art In deep translucent shadows the artist interlaces light and dark revealing with candid strokes the truths and validities of life Paint drips from his brush onto a canvas of fleshly white working with intense veracity as morning sun becomes moonlight With passion unmasked he relies on blind intuition and paints a somatic portrait Visions found while in a trance ochre and indigo, texture in black bloodletting hues of crimson lust An abstract of motley conveyance he titled, "Into Life Man is Thrust"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 7/2/2018 4:01:00 PM
With each daring stoke of your pen, you have truly put the 'dramatic' in the term, 'dramatic verse!' Kudos! ~ Gershon
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Date: 7/2/2018 4:36:00 PM
Thanks ever so much for visiting my poetry. Each of your comments is very welcome.
Date: 6/11/2018 12:47:00 PM
Well crafted Laney...beautifully scripted as usual my friend...keep them coming...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 6/14/2018 7:26:00 AM
Thank you, Wingy..lol Seriously, thanks very much.
Date: 6/7/2018 12:20:00 PM
Are you the artist? For you have revealed the machinations of at least one. You are able to make words work for you so well.
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Date: 6/8/2018 5:36:00 AM
Thanks sun
Date: 6/7/2018 12:03:00 PM
Great stuff Lin, really well done...
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Date: 6/7/2018 12:06:00 PM
Your compliments are always sincere, Charlie. I thank you for that and for the many sweet comments you've left me.
Date: 6/7/2018 11:44:00 AM
Such a beautiful verse, Lin Fave line : "bloodletting hues of crimson lust" excellent xxoo
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Date: 6/7/2018 11:57:00 AM
Thank you for the avid comments, Mike. They're greatly appreciated.
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