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Into a Wild Abyss- Lei

Sunsets melt in a forest glen,
and a white horse rests in the Zen.
A blue wren on a rock perches,
and mingling are leaning birches.
Bright and colorful wildflowers sway,
and water lilies twirl and play.
A swift stream of polished stone turns,
and I am lost among the ferns !

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December 30, 2019


Poetry/Lay/Into a Wild Abyss
Copyright Protected, ID 19-1213-662-02
All Rights Reserved.  Written Under Pseudonym.


Written for the contest, Lay It On Me
sponsor, Charles Messina

Second Place

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Eve Roper Date: 1/16/2020 10:27:00 PM Beautiful verse, Dear Heart , congratulations your win. Eve Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 1/17/2020 3:18:00 PM Eve thank you for the beautiful and the congratulations!

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 1/16/2020 6:20:00 PM Wow Constance, this is the first place winner for me and I am putting it into my favorites. Last line elevates the entire poem. Congratulations on your second placement! xxoo Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 1/17/2020 3:19:00 PM Connie thanks for the compliment and congratulations and the fav!

Charles Messina Date: 1/16/2020 8:00:00 AM Wonderfully written, Constance. This naturistic poem just flowed so well with great imagery! Congratulations on your win! Hugs Charlie Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 1/17/2020 3:20:00 PM Charlie thanks for the contest and my placement and the compliment!

Curtis Moorman Date: 1/16/2020 7:19:00 AM Constance, congrats on your win in Charlie's contest! I love the way you wove the aspects of nature into your poem. I too am a nature lover. Great write! Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 1/17/2020 3:22:00 PM Curtis, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations. So happy to hear you love nature too!