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"Into this wild abyss, The womb of nature . . . "

-John Milton, Paradise Lost, Book II

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Sunsets melt in a forest glen, and a white horse rests in the Zen. A blue wren on a rock perches, and mingling are leaning birches. Bright and colorful wildflowers sway, and water lilies twirl and play. A swift stream of polished stone turns, and I am lost among the ferns ! __________________________ December 30, 2019 Poetry/Lay/Into a Wild Abyss Copyright Protected, ID 19-1213-662-02 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Lay It On Me sponsor, Charles Messina Second Place

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Date: 1/16/2020 10:27:00 PM
Beautiful verse, Dear Heart , congratulations your win. Eve
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Date: 1/17/2020 3:18:00 PM
Eve thank you for the beautiful and the congratulations!
Date: 1/16/2020 6:20:00 PM
Wow Constance, this is the first place winner for me and I am putting it into my favorites. Last line elevates the entire poem. Congratulations on your second placement! xxoo
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Constance La France
Date: 1/17/2020 3:19:00 PM
Connie thanks for the compliment and congratulations and the fav!
Date: 1/16/2020 8:00:00 AM
Wonderfully written, Constance. This naturistic poem just flowed so well with great imagery! Congratulations on your win! Hugs Charlie
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Date: 1/17/2020 3:20:00 PM
Charlie thanks for the contest and my placement and the compliment!
Date: 1/16/2020 7:19:00 AM
Constance, congrats on your win in Charlie's contest! I love the way you wove the aspects of nature into your poem. I too am a nature lover. Great write!
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Constance La France
Date: 1/17/2020 3:22:00 PM
Curtis, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations. So happy to hear you love nature too!

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