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Intimate Times

We lay together , our bodies salty and weak, the window breeze cools..







 written by Michael J. Falotco

"One Amazing Line" contest sponsoed by
Constance La France- Rambling Poet

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

December 19, 2010 at 8:21 AM

haven't congratulated you yet with this winner, Michael-- way to go with this wonderful monoku :) -- nikko :)

Sara Kendrick

December 16, 2010 at 3:05 PM

Congratulations..Sara

Francine Roberts

December 15, 2010 at 8:43 AM

beautiful Michael, congrats on your win in the contest

Daniel Cwiak

December 15, 2010 at 8:38 AM

Oh, Michael, this gives me so many favored memories of times I would have again. Great write. Congrats on your win. Dan C

Audrey Haick

December 15, 2010 at 8:23 AM

Congratulations on your well-deserved win in the contest, Michael! Blessings, peace and joy to you and Rosanna! Love, Audrey

Eamon Duffin

December 15, 2010 at 6:52 AM

Hi. Congratulations on your deserved win in the 'One Amazing Line', contest. Eamon

Nette Onclaud

December 15, 2010 at 3:42 AM

wow.. best wishes on your well-deserved award! enjoy… nette

Tahera Mannan

December 14, 2010 at 10:52 PM

Wow real hot Micheal. Many congratulations for this win.

Andrea Dietrich

December 14, 2010 at 9:49 PM

Congratulations, Michael on a well deserved win! LUv, andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

December 14, 2010 at 7:39 PM

Congrats to my White Knight for your super win in the One Liners contest with this eloquent line.. enjoy another well deserved top ten sweet victory with luv.. Jersey Girl always with luv..

John Freeman

December 14, 2010 at 5:47 PM

Michael, congratulations on a worthy poem's honor. Agape, Moses

Deb Radke

December 14, 2010 at 3:22 PM

Michael, I wish I had told you when I first read this how much I liked it. But I think I was new to the site, and felt like I shouldn't start to comment yet on other people's work. Anyway, this is a great monoku; I can see this picture also. It would perhaps be painted by someone like Wyeth, with the curtains and the window... See what you have done with this one line; created a total visual picture in my mind. Congratulations. This will surely have to go in the book. Love, Deb

James Fraser

December 14, 2010 at 2:28 PM

Top write Michael, what a painting this would make. Mega congratulations on your most deserved win in Constance's contest >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

December 14, 2010 at 5:44 AM

Congratulations Michael on your win in Constance's "One Amazing Line" contest. Love, Carol

Stephen Parker

December 12, 2010 at 7:32 PM

Scintillating, seductive, and salivatingly sensual! You laid bare the penultimate moment of love making. Good contrast with the heat from the physical bonding and the cooling breeze. Enjoyed thoroughly! Looked forward to read more of your thoughtful verse in the near future. Steve

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

December 11, 2010 at 3:15 PM

What a beautiful line.Good luck Michael in the contest and thanks also for your kind comment.Teresa

Debbie Guzzi

December 7, 2010 at 5:59 PM

I do remember....perhaps I will yet again have this joy. Light & Love

Sharon Ruebel

December 7, 2010 at 2:11 PM

Hello Michael, Amazing and oh so sensual Love it As Always, Shar

Diane Locksley

December 7, 2010 at 12:06 PM

A very sensual poem Michael. Good luck in the contest!

Nette Onclaud

December 7, 2010 at 11:24 AM

goosebumps, michael... what a splendid winning entry for the contest... all the luck to you.. warmest, nette

Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway

December 7, 2010 at 10:28 AM

intimate, passionate, and loving... well done Michael! Good luck in the contest... Lay

Adell Foster

December 7, 2010 at 7:16 AM

Without a doubt this piquant monoku is a scintillating representation of passion. Awesome writing Michael :-) Good Luck in the contest ~ Thank you for your welcomed comments on my poem "Affectionately Yours" Many Blessings, Always, Adell

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

December 7, 2010 at 6:39 AM

Oh yes my White Knight.. can picture the romantic scene now .. awesome luv.. good luck in Constance's great new one liner contest.. this is lovely and a keeper my friend.. Jersey Girl agrees with football synopsis.. the Jets are usually better but 2nd is good too... I just LUV NEW YORK..what can I say... and u do remember Joe Willie right? luv..