Wilma Neels Poet Etheree

Interweave

Time
Our stint
Together 
Seems to glide by
Two days feels like hours
Those moments I cling to
Memories, like air we breathe
Till we are no longer apart 
Mutual love and trust our measure
Intertwined no longer you and me, us…

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Grace Eunsong Lee October 26, 2010 at 3:42 AM I feel like this should be a song...:) I have one of your poems in my favorites so came by to check out a few recent ones. Thanks for sharing~

Kabuteng P.Ink K. October 22, 2010 at 7:08 PM go enjoy your Saturday :D and eep I wish you luck! if you're successful you better pass on that pen to me ;) -- hugs & go sing a duet with the birds :) birds are chirping over here too, with the leaves rustling about and sunny sunny rays ...

James Fraser October 22, 2010 at 8:04 AM The awaiting of the reunite, lovely warm expectant emotions in this lovely etheree Wilma >> James :)

Andrea Dietrich October 20, 2010 at 7:02 PM what a wonderful etheree, Wilma! Great ending on it. Luv, Andrea

Michael J. Falotico October 20, 2010 at 4:34 PM Beautifuly written my partner in crime...love to you Michael

James Peranteau October 20, 2010 at 2:51 PM You have felt true love dear poet ! God speed ! much love, james

Sara Kendrick October 20, 2010 at 2:33 PM Great descriptive write of true love..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..This one goes to my favs..Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K. October 20, 2010 at 10:31 AM well, my turn to say what a sad write this is -- and how cool! an etheree from you! I agree with BG, you are getting better and better -really enjoy how you are showcasing your talent-- way to go, Missy :) -- hugs :)

Carolyn Devonshire October 20, 2010 at 6:17 AM How well you describe the anticipation of waiting for that special man who makes you feel complete when you are together, Wilma. Barbara's right, you do get better and better! Love, Carolyn

Barbara Gorelick October 20, 2010 at 6:09 AM You just keep getting better and better..love this one.BG

Doris Culverhouse October 20, 2010 at 5:01 AM enjoyed reading your heartfelt work today!