Interweave

Time Our stint Together Seems to glide by Two days feels like hours Those moments I cling to Memories, like air we breathe Till we are no longer apart Mutual love and trust our measure Intertwined no longer you and me, us…

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Grace Eunsong Lee

Date: 10/26/2010 3:42:00 AM

I feel like this should be a song...:) I have one of your poems in my favorites so came by to check out a few recent ones. Thanks for sharing~

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/22/2010 7:08:00 PM

go enjoy your Saturday :D and eep I wish you luck! if you're successful you better pass on that pen to me ;) -- hugs & go sing a duet with the birds :) birds are chirping over here too, with the leaves rustling about and sunny sunny rays ...

James Fraser

Date: 10/22/2010 8:04:00 AM

The awaiting of the reunite, lovely warm expectant emotions in this lovely etheree Wilma >> James :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/20/2010 7:02:00 PM

what a wonderful etheree, Wilma! Great ending on it. Luv, Andrea

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 10/20/2010 4:34:00 PM

Beautifuly written my partner in crime...love to you Michael

James Peranteau

Date: 10/20/2010 2:51:00 PM

You have felt true love dear poet ! God speed ! much love, james

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/20/2010 2:33:00 PM

Great descriptive write of true love..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..This one goes to my favs..Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/20/2010 10:31:00 AM

well, my turn to say what a sad write this is -- and how cool! an etheree from you! I agree with BG, you are getting better and better -really enjoy how you are showcasing your talent-- way to go, Missy :) -- hugs :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/20/2010 6:17:00 AM

How well you describe the anticipation of waiting for that special man who makes you feel complete when you are together, Wilma. Barbara's right, you do get better and better! Love, Carolyn

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/20/2010 6:09:00 AM

You just keep getting better and better..love this one.BG

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/20/2010 5:01:00 AM

enjoyed reading your heartfelt work today!