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Emotions exposed with a precise incision Check every dawn like a new-born religion Have you messaged me yet, how long will I wait? Eager, expectant for our internet date. No room here for ego's I've played enough games My love for our secrets will never be tamed Ellicit, forbidden, escaping for hours. But you'll never be mine, i'll never be yours Our hearts they are taken, our meeting to late but still cant deny, you cant defeat fate stars unaligned, this isnt our time but still I can dream and will wait a lifetime.... 31 May 2011

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Date: 6/29/2011 5:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Jodie. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/20/2011 8:57:00 PM
ooh la la, excitement of the internet! Beware who really might be on the other end. Belated congrats on your HM.
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Date: 6/11/2011 7:48:00 AM
congrats on your win with this great piece. cory
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Date: 5/31/2011 11:17:00 AM
Thank you for posting your amazing poetry . It was a pleasure to read. I am hoping you have a wonderful day full of inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/31/2011 8:41:00 AM
intricately done with rich images, jodie.. i like! :) huggs,nette
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Date: 5/31/2011 3:48:00 AM
Expressive work..Sara
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Date: 5/31/2011 2:36:00 AM
cool poem i love it luv*Skat
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Jodie Williams
Date: 5/31/2011 2:57:00 AM
thanx for taking the time to comment skat :)

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