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Orbiting earth, a man made creation It looks like a moving star shining bright It's the international space station Big as a football field; an awesome sight Orbits the earth sixteen times day and night Launched in November nineteen ninety eight A huge four hundred and fifty ton weight Six men and women form the stations crew Always a concern it may gravitate So orbital height they have to review. Written 17th May 2020 For Dizain - Poetry Contest Sponsored By Dear Heart .

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Date: 2/21/2021 8:05:00 AM
Congrats on this informative winner. You must be well read about current events. Your presence at my page is always encouraging. Sara
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Date: 2/21/2021 8:16:00 AM
Thank you very much Sara, space has always fascinated me. Hope your weekend is going well. Tom
Date: 6/5/2020 5:28:00 AM
Wow how did I miss this gem Tom? It has just come up on my screen ~ spooky huh ~ but I am so glad it did... A wonderful write my friend and many congratulations on your well deserved win . With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 6/5/2020 9:37:00 AM
Thank you very much Ann, the sky must be amazing where you live. Tom
Date: 6/1/2020 3:52:00 AM
Great offering, as I usually avoid such topics. Well-written, had my focus every line. shalom shalom
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Date: 6/1/2020 5:17:00 AM
Thank you very much Anil. Happy you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 5/28/2020 8:41:00 PM
What goes up must come down. Well... lets hope not. Have a great day my friend.
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Date: 5/28/2020 9:58:00 PM
Thank you David, I read that every now and again they have to raise it higher Into orbit to prevent that from happening, I remember when skylab did just that. Tom
Date: 5/22/2020 7:47:00 AM
Tom, wonderfully penned and congratulations on your win in my contest _Constance
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Date: 5/22/2020 8:34:00 AM
Thank you very much Constance, I found it quite tricky but persevered, thank you too for hosting the contest Tom
Date: 5/21/2020 8:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your terrific win my friend!
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Date: 5/21/2020 9:26:00 PM
Thank you Caren, another new form I attempted. Tom
Date: 5/21/2020 11:24:00 AM
Congrats Tom a great poem but have never tried this form of poetry - must give it a bash! Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 5/21/2020 2:33:00 PM
Thank you Jennifer, my first attempt, found it a bit tricky. Tom
Date: 5/21/2020 2:01:00 AM
I agree Tom, it took me some time to write mine too. It was my first Dizain. You did great! Congratulations on your wonderful win! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 5/21/2020 4:24:00 AM
Thank you very much Connie, the restrictions were a bit of a challenge. Tom
Date: 5/20/2020 12:07:00 AM
Coming back to congratulate you on your win Tom :)
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Date: 5/20/2020 3:52:00 AM
Thank you very much Aditi, Much appreciated. Tom
Date: 5/19/2020 1:40:00 PM
Tom, you always pick such unique and innovative themes for your poem. I really like this one. It just flows with your creativity. Really like the last line - our orbits in life we all "have to review." Congratulations and blessings dear friend. Over Fork Over.
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Date: 5/19/2020 5:29:00 PM
Thank you Sam. I was a bit restricted as I could only use ten lines, there's so much more I could have wrote, found that form a bit tricky too. Over Fork Over. Tom
Date: 5/18/2020 8:45:00 PM
Nice Tom, Ive seen it before sky watching.
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Date: 5/19/2020 1:33:00 AM
Thank you Timothy, without a doubt an amazing creation. Awesome to see going over. Tom
Date: 5/18/2020 8:44:00 PM
Learn so much from your poems, Tom! Thank you! :) gw
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Date: 5/19/2020 1:32:00 AM
Thank you Gershon, although N. A. S. A leads the way there are about 15 other countries involved, thats why you see astronauts from other nations on board. Tom
Date: 5/18/2020 6:39:00 PM
Hello Tom … another informative poem from your pen Tom. Something much of the world relies on now, but until reading your poem I knew nothing about the space station, but now I know something - thanks Tom - Lindsay
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Date: 5/19/2020 1:28:00 AM
Thank you Lindsay, it's an awesome sight passing over like a giant star, an amazing piece of engineering. Tom
Date: 5/18/2020 1:19:00 PM
Nice... Eyes on the World and Stars
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Date: 5/18/2020 5:02:00 PM
Thank you Arturo, the view from up there is fantastic. Tom
Date: 5/18/2020 12:15:00 PM
wonderfully done, tom.. yo are a space enthusiast... huggs!
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Date: 5/18/2020 5:01:00 PM
Thank you Nette, it's always fascinated me. Tom
Date: 5/18/2020 11:27:00 AM
It’s amazing how it stays in place. Unfortunately one day it will come back to earth. They may wish at that point that they didn’t add so many rooms.
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Date: 5/18/2020 5:00:00 PM
Thanks Richard. I remember skylab, luckily it landed in the ocean. Tom
Date: 5/18/2020 10:30:00 AM
I read Jan's comment. Don't worry. The viruses can be made here on earth but we deny where it came from. Don't want to be xenophobic!)))) Not sure a virus can even exist in outer space. A magnificent thing the space station is. We will learn a lot from their studies...)) Great poem Panagiota xoxo Best wishes, as well..you go, Tom
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Date: 5/23/2020 9:39:00 PM
Tom~ just about anything or anyone can do us in. I really am convinced fear is fun. We can huddle together waiting for the boogeyman. Today's fears are laughable compared to what lies ahead. Like a dark sun and stars crashing to th earth. Unfortunately, most of humanity does not know this? No, they do not. PR
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Date: 5/18/2020 10:44:00 AM
Thank you Panagiota, saw a film where there was a virus in space and it grew and came to earth, the name escapes me. It's awesome to see, the original was quite small but they kept adding to it. Tom
Date: 5/18/2020 9:12:00 AM
- Yeah, really an awesome sight ... an interesting theme, Tom - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/18/2020 10:41:00 AM
Thank you Anne, love to see it go across our way. Hope you're all settled in. Tom
Date: 5/18/2020 8:09:00 AM
Very informative, I am constantly watching the sky for things, well done Tom, keep the faith and stay healthy. xo
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Date: 5/18/2020 9:01:00 AM
Thank you Pixie, there's so much to see in space, pity light pollution stops a lot of people from seeing the beauty of the heavens. Stay safe. Tom
Date: 5/18/2020 6:44:00 AM
Your topic is beyond ordinary, Tom--I find it hard to write those Dizain rhymes--you did well. All the best.
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Date: 5/18/2020 6:48:00 AM
Thank you Vijay, first dizain, didn't find it easy but I'll try anything once. Tom
Date: 5/18/2020 4:10:00 AM
I really enjoyed your informative Dizain Tom. I think I have seen it in the night sky. Wonderful! xxoo
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Date: 5/18/2020 4:48:00 AM
Thank you Connie, I must admit it isn't an easy form to write. Hope you're well Tom
Date: 5/18/2020 2:41:00 AM
Very informative write Tom its an amazing sight - they are far safer up there than down here at the moment!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/18/2020 3:17:00 AM
Thanks Jan, so true just hope they don't bring back an alien virus lol It's awesome to see, nasa send an email when it's going to orbit over our house. A subject that's always fascinated me Tom
Date: 5/17/2020 11:59:00 PM
This is so creative Tom and so visually artistic. Beautifully done. All the best :)
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 5/18/2020 12:05:00 AM
Thank you Aditi, I see it often and looks awesome on a clear night. Hope you're well. Tom

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