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I'm working with intriguing form and find it quite confusing, I hope that I have understood directions I am using. Stopping a while to eat some food, to sharpen up my thinking, Now staring at the empty page, with confidence fast shrinking. I fear I have reached dreaded age where brain cells are compromised. Five lines written, four to go, nearer than I'd realized. Creative thoughts are running slow, it's time to start our dinner. Though this has been a lot of fun I fear it's not a winner. Never-the-less I deem it done and go on to other duties.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/15/2015 10:19:00 AM
Joyce This is a sweet lovely win. *Skat LOVE*
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Date: 2/4/2015 2:54:00 AM
I had fun reading this Joyce and am happy it was a winner! Cheers and Congrats!
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Date: 2/3/2015 6:40:00 PM
I really LIKE this one. I did my Mussle train poem kind of in this disparaging style and was able to score a win.Glad this one did too. BIG congrats!!
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Date: 2/3/2015 4:04:00 AM
Joyce beautiful words sublime,, congrats on huge win!
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Date: 2/2/2015 9:49:00 PM
Surprise, Joyce...it's a winner! Your poem is so cute, I knew it would do well! Congrats and Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 2/2/2015 4:51:00 PM
Back again to say congratulations on your winning poem, Joyce. Blessings Eve
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Date: 2/2/2015 11:59:00 AM
I can relate to this too Joyce! many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/29/2015 11:07:00 PM
Joyce,how witty, I enjoyed reading your poem, a 7. Blessings Eve
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Date: 1/20/2015 10:22:00 AM
From what I can tell, Joyce, you have mastered this form without a mistake, but I'm no expert! I'm sure you will do well in the contest with this fun write...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 1/19/2015 11:19:00 PM
oh Joyce you're so cute! At least you can say you tried which I didn't think I could get it! hugs, Deb
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Date: 1/19/2015 9:11:00 PM
I could have wrote this myself, I know exactly what you mean!
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Date: 1/19/2015 7:31:00 PM
There is a lot to like with your poem. It was a pleasure reading. Jim
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