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07.11-2023

Anne-Lise Andresen

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                                        wisdom earned not free
                                      a restless pilgrim's journey ~
                                                 fears self-reflection
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Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
November 30, 2023 at 2:47 PM
Anne, I loved this Senryu. That reminds me of something very near to me, The pilgrims to Santiago. Long journey where you get lot of wisdom and in the end you find yourself.. Well done Anne Hugsxxx
Poet Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 12:27 PM
A magnificent Senryu, brimming with profound insights despite its brevity. May it bring forth abundant blessings and enlightenment.
Andresen Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 12:44 PM
- Many thanks, Las :) - hugs
Dietrich Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 1:30 PM
Nice . a deep one.
Andresen Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 12:44 PM
- Many thanks, Andrea :) - hugs
DiMino Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 7:44 AM
If one cannot look at one's self in the mirror, and say, I have been honorable, done my best, then one should cover all mirrors -- if not break them, no other reflection worth having.
Andresen Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 12:43 PM
- Many thanks, Joe :) - hugs
Buhagiar Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 2:06 AM
Wonderful Senryu. So much to understand from such a short poem. Blessings.
Andresen Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 12:43 PM
- Many thanks, Victor :) - hugs
Bowring Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 9:26 AM
This is a great Senryu dear Anne- Lise. Love your thoughtful, carefully crafted words with so much conveyed within the few lines. It has a great impact as it’s so reflective. Well written. Enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing. Hugs and smiles to you xx :):)
Andresen Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 12:43 PM
- Many thanks, Christina :) - hugs
Baker Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 5:19 PM
Nice Senryu, Anne-Lise. Made me think in just three short lines. :-) Smiles ~ Blessings, my friend. Bill
Andresen Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 12:43 PM
- Many thanks, Bill :) - hugs
Kitchin Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 3:00 PM
Anne-Lise, well penned, hugs.
Andresen Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 12:42 PM
- Many thanks, Tania :) - hugs
M  Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 1:03 PM
A powerful little poem Sunshine….the first line is so very true! Debx
Goldsmith Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 11:43 AM
A creative write. Love This One With Great Picture....... Where do I get this little person with the mop??? Hahaha!!! Hugs...  Have a wonderful day...........
Andresen Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 11:47 AM
- Can be ordered at: htppt//XXhjenevask.for.den.som.tenger.det.uk - Paula :))) - Thank you very much :) - hugs
Narain Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 11:18 AM
nice one
Andresen Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 11:48 AM
- Many thanks, Jay :) - hugs
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