Instrumental Fight

“Hey, Guitar, you’re such a prima donna, 
Always out the front of the stage,
Thinking you’re the biggest in the band, 
With some drugged, delusional rage.”

“What’s that Drums? I can’t hear what you say, 
Walk up here and tell me your woe.
Just walk over here, like other instruments do, 
Anytime, during the show.”

“Yeah, whatever, I’m too important to move, 
I’m better than a little fretted thing,
I am the beat, the tempo, leading the entire band, 
And I own what the singer can sing.”

“You two, cut it out, neither of you are the real big thing,
You aren’t what the crowd wants to see,
We all know they come to hear my blues,
Hear me, the harmonica, play blues in key”.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 5/22/2017 5:03:00 PM
Like it Lewis I know nothing about music could not even play a triangle in tune. But I believe its the Drummers who are the 1 who get all the Chicks
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 5/22/2017 10:00:00 PM
Thank you Christopher
Date: 5/20/2017 5:24:00 AM
This is such a nice and fun poem! Well done! I thoroughly enjoyed it
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Date: 5/22/2017 10:00:00 PM
Thank you Kudzai
Date: 5/18/2017 5:53:00 AM
Lewis, that is really well done and a lot of fun to read and reread:) Amitiés
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Date: 5/22/2017 10:00:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Marie
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