Andrea Dietrich Poet Rhyme

Instrument of Love

Play me in the morning before I've time to dress.
Play me softly. I will be your lute.
Hold me to your lips. . . and lightly press.

Should you see me in the afternoon,
pick me up, and I will be your harp.
Caress my strings and hear my angelic tune.

In the evening, come on playfully.
I'll be busy in the kitchen, but a tambourine
I'll be for you as I sway my hips! Jingle-jangle me!

But at night, I want to be your fond guitar.
First cradle me; then stroke me with your passion.
Feel me vibrate with delight as I sing and glisten like a star.

Nov. 8, 2019

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Michael Craig January 8, 2020 at 3:53 PM Very well done. - Andrea

Francis J Grasso January 1, 2020 at 7:18 AM Lovely winner. Congratulations, Andrea. Have a great 2020! ...Fran

John Hamilton December 31, 2019 at 4:25 PM Congrats Andrea in this latest win, very musical, I like !

Brenda Chiri December 31, 2019 at 10:48 AM Andrea congratulations on your top win!;)

Gershon Wolf December 10, 2019 at 9:28 PM So musically sensual...So sensually musical. Such a delight to contemplate the interplay!...Congrats on your trophy win in Julia's contest, Andrea! Warm wishes, Gershon

Susan Woodrow December 10, 2019 at 7:34 PM mmm...the title and write are superb. I'd say the judge had very good taste! :))

Kurt Ravidas December 10, 2019 at 1:24 PM Back to congratulate this silver quartet. Music is the most primitive of the arts in the sense of impact, but the most complex in the technical sense)

Eve Roper December 10, 2019 at 9:22 AM Beautiful, Andrea, fairytale to a lot , but a lot of us would have loved this way of love. Congratulations on your win.

Constance La France December 10, 2019 at 8:21 AM Andrea, this is so beautifully penned and a big congratulations on your win in the contest !

Greg Gaul December 10, 2019 at 8:05 AM I can only hope you've lived this poem and not only pined for it. Such clever phrasing rides the edge and makes this more romantic than explicit. "Softly pressing" that delicate balance. But taking a chance is what good poems are all about. Congratulations on your fine penning here and poetic achievement. Andrea Dietrich December 10, 2019 at 8:15 AM thanks, Greg, yes, once in a blue moon I live this poem (especially the part in the kitchen. haha)

Line Gauthier December 10, 2019 at 1:03 AM Back with more well deserved congrats, Andrea.

Na Na December 10, 2019 at 12:39 AM Congrats on your winning poem Andrea

Line Gauthier November 13, 2019 at 6:26 AM Sweet, Andrea. Congrats on your top win.

Anne-Lise Andresen November 13, 2019 at 4:42 AM - A lovely musical 1st place in the contest, Andrea - Congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Beata Agustin November 12, 2019 at 10:51 PM Wow! Congrats! This is lovable! You've expressed your multi-roles as a great lover. God bless you.

John Gondolf November 12, 2019 at 8:04 PM A sensual song of love. Congrats on your win, Andrea. Hugs, John

Sandra Adams November 12, 2019 at 7:08 PM back to say congratulations :) hugs

Brenda Chiri November 12, 2019 at 6:57 PM Andrea congrats on a great win!;)

Bobby May November 12, 2019 at 6:33 PM Congratulation on your Win! Andrea well done my friend!

Kurt Ravidas November 10, 2019 at 4:04 PM Sensual melody for four instruments. I like the sound. Good luck in the contest, Andrea.

Lindsay Laurie November 9, 2019 at 9:55 PM Hello Andrea … another fine verse from you. Musicians do love their instruments more than just about anything - thank you Andrea - Lindsay

Alexis Y. November 9, 2019 at 11:22 AM WoW! Andrea, You did a great job with the contest theme. I found it to be such a "sexy" write. I think Bobby will like this one. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Richard Lamoureux November 9, 2019 at 8:46 AM This is steamy Andrea. It makes a fellow want to major in music. Practice, practice, practice!

Vijay Pandit November 9, 2019 at 8:32 AM Beautiful sights and sounds of metaphors in melodies of love--excellent write, Andrea.

Sandra Adams November 9, 2019 at 6:51 AM a melody between lovers, your words sing beautifully my friend.... hugs :)