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Instinct - Tanka 3

mind still on his work
he picks up the ringing phone 
on instinct--- 
     the way he reaches for his lover 
     before opening his eyes









Tanka 3: Return to TOP TEN - Poetry Contest - Shared 4th Place with Franco Gonza

Sponsor : Andrea Dietrich

25 March 2015

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Robert Lawrence

April 22, 2015 at 2:01 PM

Sometimes these short poems have a lot more power then longer ones.

Sara Kendrick

April 2, 2015 at 2:59 PM

Congrats!! Sara

Paul Callus

March 31, 2015 at 12:39 PM

Hi Kim! So pleased to be back with merited congratulations. I had no doubt this would be a winner! // paul

Eve Roper

March 29, 2015 at 10:41 AM

What a wonderful twist on your poem. Congratulations on your win a 7 Blessings eve

Njeri Hunjeri

March 29, 2015 at 3:08 AM

Nice!! Congrats!!

Mohan Chutani

March 28, 2015 at 10:50 PM

nice romantic tanka. thanx for visiting my page Kim. Congrats. Mohan

Sandra Haight

March 28, 2015 at 4:31 PM

Congratulations on your win, Kim! Love the twist in your poem! Sandra

John Lawless

March 28, 2015 at 1:48 PM

Congrats on the win, nicely written

Kp Nunez

March 28, 2015 at 1:53 PM

Thank you for sharing my joy, John. Appreciate your comment and visit. Kim :)

David Mohn

March 28, 2015 at 1:34 PM

This is such a smart and nuanced tanka…wonderfully written Kim

Kp Nunez

March 28, 2015 at 1:44 PM

Thank you, David. Honored to be in the winners' list too. Your name is up there. Thank God Andrea liked our entries. :) Kim

Abdul Malik Mandani

March 28, 2015 at 12:05 PM

Hey, this is good. I really like it. Many congrats.

Kp Nunez

March 28, 2015 at 12:15 PM

Thank you, Abdul. Oh but I remember your entry, the one that made me smile...We're both on the winner's list! I really thank God Andrea liked our entries. Smiles from the isles! Kim :)

Joseph May

March 28, 2015 at 11:15 AM

Congrats on a fine win Patrice

Kp Nunez

March 28, 2015 at 12:12 PM

Thank you once again, Joseph, for sharing my joy. Thank God Andrea liked my take on modern tanka. Smiles from the isles! :)

Carrie Richards

March 28, 2015 at 10:20 AM

Oh yes........so true to life, and an excellent take on human nature! This is terrific, Kim !!

Kp Nunez

March 28, 2015 at 12:10 PM

Thank you, Carrie. I wanted to see how far Andrea would allow me with my take on what a "modern" tanka is. Thank God she liked it! Oh, but we're both on the winners' list! Hugs! :) Kim

Constance La France

March 28, 2015 at 7:41 AM

Kim, congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest with this beautifully written tanka, a perfect 7

Kp Nunez

March 28, 2015 at 12:06 PM

Ain't that right! LOL! Really happy we both joined and that Andrea sponsored again! More hugs! :)

Kp Nunez

March 28, 2015 at 11:59 AM

Thank you, BW. I see your name on the winners' list as well! Another reason to thank God. Appreciate your rating too. Hugs! :) Kim

Jan Allison

March 28, 2015 at 5:48 AM

dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison

March 28, 2015 at 11:57 AM

I am made up Kim I struggle so hard with this form and to place in the contests means so much to me:-) Hugs jan xx

Kp Nunez

March 28, 2015 at 11:56 AM

Thank you, Jan. Another reason to thank God. We're both on the winners' list! Hugs! :)

Andrea Dietrich

March 28, 2015 at 12:32 AM

I really enjoyed this tanka. the comparison of his work day to his home life, and what is instinctual in each one. Nicely done. congrats in my contest.

Kp Nunez

March 28, 2015 at 11:32 AM

Thank you, Andie, for placing me in your winners' list. God bless you more for continuously sponsoring contests! Hugs! Kim :)

William J. Jr. Atfield

March 27, 2015 at 10:59 AM

Good morning Kim : “ Thank you, sire, for your visit ”, you are most welcome my Dear, and sorry Kim, that I get to deep into “ and sharing your thoughts.” I have seen that you have mind a couple of more gems from the subconscious lands of history. Keep up the good work !!! “ I wish you a lovely day. Hugs! Kim :) ”And may the same be for you !!! Best wishes, big hugs and kisses !!! Bill .

Joseph May

March 27, 2015 at 10:05 AM

A well written Tanka Patrice...best wishes in the contest

Richard Lamoureux

March 26, 2015 at 8:30 PM

It is best to be fully engaged when reaching for your lover or she may vanish without warning.

Bl Devnath

March 26, 2015 at 5:17 PM

Few words' magic done beautifully about instinct. Good luck in the contest. 7 sure. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Paul Callus

March 26, 2015 at 12:43 PM

Excellent and unique take you present here, Kim!! Your pivotal instinct serves you well; love your final two lines. #7 In my eyes...a winner! hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

March 26, 2015 at 5:51 AM

a different take KIm. Hope you will do well on the contest.. :)!//olive eloisa

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 26, 2015 at 4:58 AM

- This was a unique Tanka, dear Kim ! - I love it, 7 !! - I wish you best of luck in the contest ..... and a relaxed afternoon - hugs and <3 // Anne-Lise :)