Mirela Petalli Poet Free verse

Instant

Take me…
		Softly…
			Firmly…
Inside your thoughts is beautiful. 
Sweet confusion, troubled spirit,
There I feel good, beloved,
No past, no future,
Enfold me with a glance,
The deepness of a feeling you teach,
Take me…
	Softly…
			Firmly…
Sublime instant isolated in time.

Mirela Kapaj Albania

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Carol Sunshine Brown March 9, 2011 at 10:33 AM Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Mirela. Love Carol

Jod!E Quintero February 19, 2011 at 1:22 PM Absolutely lovely! Jodie Q

Carol Sunshine Brown February 18, 2011 at 12:52 PM Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Mirela. Love, Carol

Daver Austin February 16, 2011 at 1:48 PM Seems an entire lifetime is but an instance or two. congrats on this selection. daver

Andrea Dietrich January 17, 2011 at 8:15 PM This is so nice to read. Congratulations in this contest, Mirela. LUv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta January 15, 2011 at 1:53 PM Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Mirela

Kash Poet January 15, 2011 at 10:36 AM This is excellent!Congrats Milera on your well deserved win!

Carol Sunshine Brown January 15, 2011 at 10:29 AM Congratulations Mirela to you for your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Foreign Exchange". Love, Carol

The Situation January 15, 2011 at 7:24 AM congradulations is in order for this wonderful escape. T. S.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 14, 2011 at 7:52 PM Congrats Mirela on your wonderful win in Debbie's contest with this brilliant write and entry luv.. enjoy your top ten success...

Debbie Guzzi January 14, 2011 at 2:40 PM Loved the titillation of the page layout, so much passion with inferance only..congrad's on your fine win..please enter my future contests! Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown June 3, 2010 at 11:27 AM Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Mirela. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol

May 31, 2010 at 3:07 PM Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown April 8, 2010 at 3:16 AM Congratulations on your featured poem this week Mirela. Love, Carol

Janette Fisher April 5, 2010 at 7:22 AM Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette

April 4, 2010 at 4:16 PM Much captured in this concise poem. Thank you for sharing it with us. Congratulations on being featured this week. Way to go! Karen

Andrea Dietrich April 4, 2010 at 3:10 PM Congratulations on being featured, MIrela. I like this poem! LUv, Andrea

James Fraser April 4, 2010 at 1:42 PM Mirela, many congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James

Ernilando Tugaff April 4, 2010 at 11:11 AM Soooo romantic. Caongratulations being featured. Enjoy the honor. Ernilando

Sara Kendrick February 28, 2010 at 4:06 AM Great write with feeling that is absorbed. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my "Seahorse Named Henry". Sara

Mirela Petalli February 21, 2010 at 3:37 AM thnx, Susan, hope you felt this way anytime, hugs.

Susan Palli February 21, 2010 at 3:06 AM very romantic