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Instant

Take me…
		Softly…
			Firmly…
Inside your thoughts is beautiful. 
Sweet confusion, troubled spirit,
There I feel good, beloved,
No past, no future,
Enfold me with a glance,
The deepness of a feeling you teach,
Take me…
	Softly…
			Firmly…
Sublime instant isolated in time.

Mirela Kapaj Albania

Copyright © Mirela Petalli | Year Posted 2010

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 3/9/2011 10:33:00 AM Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Mirela. Love Carol Login to Reply

Jod!E Quintero Date: 2/19/2011 1:22:00 PM Absolutely lovely! Jodie Q Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 2/18/2011 12:52:00 PM Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Mirela. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 2/16/2011 1:48:00 PM Seems an entire lifetime is but an instance or two. congrats on this selection. daver Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/17/2011 8:15:00 PM This is so nice to read. Congratulations in this contest, Mirela. LUv, Andrea Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 1/15/2011 1:53:00 PM Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Mirela Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 1/15/2011 10:36:00 AM This is excellent!Congrats Milera on your well deserved win! Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 1/15/2011 10:29:00 AM Congratulations Mirela to you for your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Foreign Exchange". Love, Carol Login to Reply

The Situation Date: 1/15/2011 7:24:00 AM congradulations is in order for this wonderful escape. T. S. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 1/14/2011 7:52:00 PM Congrats Mirela on your wonderful win in Debbie's contest with this brilliant write and entry luv.. enjoy your top ten success... Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 1/14/2011 2:40:00 PM Loved the titillation of the page layout, so much passion with inferance only..congrad's on your fine win..please enter my future contests! Light & Love Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 6/3/2010 11:27:00 AM Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Mirela. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Date: 5/31/2010 3:07:00 PM Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 4/8/2010 3:16:00 AM Congratulations on your featured poem this week Mirela. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Janette Fisher Date: 4/5/2010 7:22:00 AM Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette Login to Reply

Date: 4/4/2010 4:16:00 PM Much captured in this concise poem. Thank you for sharing it with us. Congratulations on being featured this week. Way to go! Karen Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/4/2010 3:10:00 PM Congratulations on being featured, MIrela. I like this poem! LUv, Andrea Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 4/4/2010 1:42:00 PM Mirela, many congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James Login to Reply

Ernilando Tugaff Date: 4/4/2010 11:11:00 AM Soooo romantic. Caongratulations being featured. Enjoy the honor. Ernilando Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 2/28/2010 4:06:00 AM Great write with feeling that is absorbed. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my "Seahorse Named Henry". Sara Login to Reply

Mirela Petalli Date: 2/21/2010 3:37:00 AM thnx, Susan, hope you felt this way anytime, hugs. Login to Reply

Susan Palli Date: 2/21/2010 3:06:00 AM very romantic Login to Reply