Instant

Take me… Softly… Firmly… Inside your thoughts is beautiful. Sweet confusion, troubled spirit, There I feel good, beloved, No past, no future, Enfold me with a glance, The deepness of a feeling you teach, Take me… Softly… Firmly… Sublime instant isolated in time. Mirela Kapaj Albania

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/9/2011 10:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Mirela. Love Carol

Jod!E Quintero

Date: 2/19/2011 1:22:00 PM

Absolutely lovely! Jodie Q

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/18/2011 12:52:00 PM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Mirela. Love, Carol

Daver Austin

Date: 2/16/2011 1:48:00 PM

Seems an entire lifetime is but an instance or two. congrats on this selection. daver

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/17/2011 8:15:00 PM

This is so nice to read. Congratulations in this contest, Mirela. LUv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/15/2011 1:53:00 PM

Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Mirela

Kash Poet

Date: 1/15/2011 10:36:00 AM

This is excellent!Congrats Milera on your well deserved win!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/15/2011 10:29:00 AM

Congratulations Mirela to you for your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Foreign Exchange". Love, Carol

The Situation

Date: 1/15/2011 7:24:00 AM

congradulations is in order for this wonderful escape. T. S.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/14/2011 7:52:00 PM

Congrats Mirela on your wonderful win in Debbie's contest with this brilliant write and entry luv.. enjoy your top ten success...

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/14/2011 2:40:00 PM

Loved the titillation of the page layout, so much passion with inferance only..congrad's on your fine win..please enter my future contests! Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/3/2010 11:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Mirela. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol