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Inspired You'Ve Got Mail

Nothing can describe the excitement that I feel. I hear the soft click as I open my laptop seal. The whirring of my modem as it chatters online. My heart is racing as it seems to take a long time. I am almost speechless as I wait for the solid light. I've been waiting all day, so I can get online tonight. The ticking of my hard drive light rapidly blinking. The feeling deep in my stomach is almost sinking. I couldn't hardly wait and it made me feel unwell. I'm almost in static as I hear "You've Got Mail". -I could not help myself, inspired by Richard and Becca, nicest people you could meet. -Not written for any contest -All rights goto the orignal maker of You've got mail and any copyrights are maintained.

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Date: 6/6/2013 2:00:00 PM
It could have been the sequel. I can just see Meg Ryan now! Love it, thanks!
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Date: 4/8/2013 11:27:00 AM
This is a lovely write, Donald! I remember how you made a comment related to this on a poem one of them had written. Can't remember whose poem it was. :) I can see how that inspired you. I especially like Richard's response...ON MY WAY! :) Good write. Thanks for sharing!
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Date: 4/8/2013 7:08:00 AM
I as well don't want to presume I am the Richard as There are many Richards here. If it is me thank you so much for these kind words. If not thank you so much that you wrote these words for another. Have a great Day Donald.
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Date: 4/8/2013 8:20:00 AM
Yes sir, You are that Richard LOL
Date: 4/4/2013 6:01:00 PM
Dear Donald, The Protege Bows to the Mentor. For I also get excited when I have mail. Very Honorable of YOU on the Copyright Footnote. I've had 2 POEMS plagerized, not here on the SOUP but before.Superb Pen. With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
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