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my haiku moment suddenly insight sees- the wood from the trees

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/8/2011 11:38:00 PM
Congratulations Brian on your win.Very nice haiku.
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Date: 12/8/2011 11:34:00 PM
This one is quite reflective in nature, Brian. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 12/8/2011 4:28:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Brian! Kim
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Date: 12/8/2011 3:59:00 PM
lol awwww the woods is nicer than just 1 tree! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 12/8/2011 3:31:00 PM
This is the epitomy of understanding Haiku, thus far, for me Brian... "the wood from the trees" is a most amazing seniment! Congrats! ~ECMc
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Date: 12/8/2011 1:18:00 PM
Ah, what a haiku moment that must indeed be, Brian! Super congrats on your win! :D
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Date: 12/8/2011 12:36:00 PM
Brian-A big congrats. to you :)!
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Date: 12/8/2011 12:23:00 PM
Brian congrats on your win..David
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Date: 12/8/2011 11:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Cyndi's "Creativity" contest Brian. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/2/2010 6:52:00 AM
Clever Senryu. It's nice to be able to see the wood from the trees.
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Date: 12/24/2009 4:15:00 PM
Splendid Senryu! Brian! Thank you for your nice comments on my poem. Best regards and Happy Holidays! Caroline.
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Date: 12/22/2009 8:48:00 AM
As interesting as your blog was this morning Brian... insight is always a good thing.. like a "sixth sense" and your senryu says it all... enjoyed .. thankxxx for your kind comments on my poetry... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie..
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Date: 12/21/2009 7:50:00 AM
Some of us get lost in a forest of words! You have the gift of "less is more"... an ability to pick the most glorious tree in the woods...and write! A lesson more of us should heed. Another example in your insightful senyru here! Thank you once again, for your kindness throughout the year, Brian. Happy Holiday to you and your family. ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 12/21/2009 7:05:00 AM
Those are fascinating moments when the light shines bright and you see!!! Great Senryu, Brian! May I personally thank you for your kindness, friendship and especially for all you've taught many of us on PS! Thank you also for reading and commenting on my poems! Truly appreciated! Love and hugs to you! God bless! Your friend, Audrey
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Date: 12/21/2009 6:36:00 AM
Very penetratively brilliant ... a great phenomenological moment.
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Date: 12/21/2009 4:26:00 AM
A great Haiku here ,Brian. Enjoyed. Also enjoyed Sean's comment on it. :) (and thank you for your congrats)
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Date: 12/21/2009 3:39:00 AM
So many times now I think when I use a paper produce "A tree died so that I could wipe my hands". And then I think "A cotton plant could give its product and not die". Thanks for the write. I don't know if this was your thoughts on this one or not. Soup mail. Sara
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Date: 12/21/2009 3:37:00 AM
I like it, sort of a play on not being able to see the forest for the trees. Very imaginative. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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Date: 12/21/2009 2:00:00 AM
A chip off the old block , Sir Brian . Clever call , as ever ...
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