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Inspired by HeidiSands painting'White Mountains'

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cocooned-
in the drifts of my mind
Summer awaits

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 11/27/2020 7:26:00 PM

Superb word choice that (for me) links summer, insect cocoons, + drifts associated with snow in winter. Enjoyable to read. Brian

Brian Strand
Date: 11/27/2020 10:16:00 PM

Cheers Brian..stay creative til then

Pashang Salehi

Date: 1/3/2019 1:57:00 AM

Traditional Haiku should be 5 7 5, isn't it? I'm retired, so cocooned- in the drifts of my mind... Spring, Summer, Fall, and winter awaits ... LOL

Brian Strand
Date: 1/3/2019 3:42:00 AM

Depends Pashang on many factors.Thanks for yourcoments.Enjoy your life at leisure!!