Sotto Poet Poet Pantoum

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Insidiousness

Unobtrusive spite with cruel-edged loudness,
Silk and lace light a night of arousing gentry,
Due to the ruddy hues and the real wellness,
Green is the scent of zeal thin field duality. 

Silk and lace light a night of arousing gentry, 
With a lurid boom, the frail light urging faded,
Green is the scent of zeal thin field duality, 
Fire, ice, and frost have razed the pinnated.
 
With a lurid boom, the frail light urging faded,
Awaiting a lasting peace still shaky evening, 
Fire, ice, and frost have razed the pinnated, 
Late at night, it is as if they were midday being. 

Awaiting a lasting peace still shaky evening,  
A slip of a rich tear dries as a sad landscape,
Late at night, it is as if they were midday being,   
Violet, in mad wiles, wisely views an escape!

A slip of a rich tear dries as a sad landscape,
Due to the ruddy hues and the real wellness, 
Violet, in mad wiles, wisely views an escape!  
Unobtrusive spite with cruel-edged loudness.

Written: June 04, 2022

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Sara Kendrick June 6, 2022 at 9:08 AM I do enjoy those pansies of winter and spring. They add such a dash of color. I enjoyed reading your work. Creative lines penned. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Vijay Pandit June 5, 2022 at 5:17 AM Amazing how you weave words in this difficult to execute form, Lasaad. Kudos my friend.

Connie Marcum Wong June 4, 2022 at 11:32 PM This form is a very challenging form to write Sotto. I don’t think I have ever written one. Yours is very beautiful my friend. Best of luck in the contest. Blessings xxoo

Bill Baker June 4, 2022 at 3:40 PM Lovely Pantoum, Lasaad. It amazes me how you write so many Pantoums. They are very difficult for most to write. Thanks for sharing them with us and the matching photos. Bill