Inside This Mind Iii (More Ochsa Insanity)

Night is the anesthetic, leaking
from the eyes of the moon's offspring
blinding the onlookers of midnight
who with sweaty hands cling
to the hot metal sun
with the smell of burnt flesh
accompanied by cracking whips
opening wounds of salty red mess
so that Zeus in heaven above
chased the away with lightening.
Although it might be Bob
and who was he fighting?
Was it plucking clouds from skylights,
knocking up the gods so we could have abortion
"Yes, let's continue our talk about sex."
The rich chocolate slave begs of her portion,
so i guess yes, it's Bob mourning for her living
and that she plucked the clouds away
So Mae-Mae took the anesthetic
knowing it was wrong, she drank it anyway.
For tonight she knew him coming.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 5/18/2009 11:37:00 AM
Did I tell you how awesome the two first verses are ... poetic extremism urged by the necessity of coherence and beauty.
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Date: 5/15/2009 4:56:00 PM
....I wanted to settle in and spend some time with "You" and "Your Writes" today....But time is pressing and I only have time for this one before I leave for this weekend....Yet, when I return, "You" shall be the first one that I shall visit~And be blessed by the wonders of "Your Soulful Words!!!":):)~Until then, "My Love Always & Forever, To You & Your Loves, John!!!"~"Have An Extremely Beautiful Weekend Dear Gifted Madison Thomer~Filled With Joys & Love!!!":):)...."Amazing Write!!!"....Bye ~
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Date: 5/15/2009 4:49:00 PM
My last stop for the weekend....Smile, "Hello Precious & Priceless Madison Thomer!!!":):)~This is a very profoundly creative and wonderful write here dear....And this is what I truly love about "Your" writings~For "You" seem to reach into the deepest parts of the treasures of "Your Beautiful Soul!!!":):)~And "You" have this amazing gift of the commend of words~Mingled with "Your Many Poetic Talents," amid "Your Creativity!!!":):)~I am going to "Love" reading "you" soo very much!!!:):)...Cont...
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Date: 5/15/2009 8:03:00 AM
Now your subject too is drinking pied piper soup made from lotus roots ... Madison Thomer ... any time you explore the mythic your voice takes on tones of universal authority ... do not ever renege on the search ... thanks for your comment on my writing ... prosperity be on your house and mind. Love.
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