Inside Out

Inside Out


Does enclosing a part of the outside
To make a dwelling
Really create an inside

Sitting in my house
I look out and realize
The house is part of and sitting outside
And, so am I
Inside out

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 4/29/2021 8:29:00 PM
What an interesting write! Are we really inside or inside-out!
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Warren Doll
Date: 5/2/2021 8:43:00 AM
Kim, I'm glad that you liked it and thanks for the visit~ Warren
Date: 4/19/2021 8:47:00 AM
Warren, Back for a peek inside & out. -Richard
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Date: 4/24/2021 7:30:00 AM
Richard, glad that you like it and for your visit~ Warren
Date: 4/1/2021 4:09:00 AM
Nice pen Warren, good writing! Take care, Gordon
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Date: 4/1/2021 6:31:00 AM
Hi Gordon, I'm glad that you liked it. All the best~ Warren
Date: 3/26/2021 4:01:00 PM
I really enjoyed your unique free verse, Warren.. So true ! Awesome.. Blessings to you, my friend..
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Warren Doll
Date: 3/29/2021 5:04:00 AM
Hi Robertina, it's great to hear from you. Thanks so much for your positive comments. Your friend~ Warren
Date: 3/22/2021 6:45:00 AM
Clever musings. Now let’s try Outside In.
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Warren Doll
Date: 3/24/2021 6:34:00 AM
Richard, all the same. Thanks for your comments and visit~ Warren
Date: 3/20/2021 8:00:00 PM
Warren, Whoa, triggered the agoraphobia in me. That first question in enigmatic topsy turvy surrealism. I hope you always enjoy the great indoors. Maybe catch a flick at the Drive-Out movies. -Richard
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Warren Doll
Date: 3/23/2021 6:45:00 AM
Richard, very clever comments, I enjoyed them very much. Thanks for the visit too~ Warren
Date: 3/18/2021 3:36:00 PM
I see your perspective --truly original, Warren. Well done.
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Warren Doll
Date: 3/20/2021 6:08:00 AM
Vijay, thanks for your positive comments and visit~ Warren
Date: 3/9/2021 6:56:00 AM
Such an interesting viewpoint Warren. I never thought of it that way and it rings true! Nice piece !!
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Warren Doll
Date: 3/11/2021 9:53:00 AM
Mike, I'm glad that you liked it.
Date: 3/8/2021 2:04:00 PM
love your way of seeing it. It's so true!
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Warren Doll
Date: 3/11/2021 9:51:00 AM
Andrea, thanks so much,
Date: 3/3/2021 3:26:00 PM
True, every dwelling is part of the outside of this creation and this is a creative poem. Well done Warren :)
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Date: 3/4/2021 7:36:00 AM
Hi Heidi, Thanks so much for your visit and positive comments. All the best~ Warren
Date: 2/28/2021 7:52:00 PM
Warren, I am confused on the concept of the inside out. I am just grateful I do have a home to keep me warm and have the beauty of the outside world. Thank you for your visit on my poem, “ Harbinger Birds of Spring” and leaving a wonderful compliment. Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/2/2021 8:18:00 AM
Hi Eve, so good to hear from you. Basically, in my poem, I'm just saying that what we call inside is in reality outside space that is enclosed. Calling it inside doesn't alter this fact. Good luck with the contest. All the best~ Warren
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