Inside Out

Inside Out Does enclosing a part of the outside To make a dwelling Really create an inside Sitting in my house I look out and realize The house is part of and sitting outside And, so am I Inside out

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/29/2021 8:29:00 PM

What an interesting write! Are we really inside or inside-out!

Warren Doll
Date: 5/2/2021 8:43:00 AM

Kim, I'm glad that you liked it and thanks for the visit~ Warren

Quoth Theraven

Date: 4/19/2021 8:47:00 AM

Warren, Back for a peek inside & out. -Richard

Warren Doll
Date: 4/24/2021 7:30:00 AM

Richard, glad that you like it and for your visit~ Warren

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 4/1/2021 4:09:00 AM

Nice pen Warren, good writing! Take care, Gordon

Warren Doll
Date: 4/1/2021 6:31:00 AM

Hi Gordon, I'm glad that you liked it. All the best~ Warren

Robertina B.

Date: 3/26/2021 4:01:00 PM

I really enjoyed your unique free verse, Warren.. So true ! Awesome.. Blessings to you, my friend..

Warren Doll
Date: 3/29/2021 5:04:00 AM

Hi Robertina, it's great to hear from you. Thanks so much for your positive comments. Your friend~ Warren

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/22/2021 6:45:00 AM

Clever musings. Now let’s try Outside In.

Warren Doll
Date: 3/24/2021 6:34:00 AM

Richard, all the same. Thanks for your comments and visit~ Warren

Quoth Theraven

Date: 3/20/2021 8:00:00 PM

Warren, Whoa, triggered the agoraphobia in me. That first question in enigmatic topsy turvy surrealism. I hope you always enjoy the great indoors. Maybe catch a flick at the Drive-Out movies. -Richard

Warren Doll
Date: 3/23/2021 6:45:00 AM

Richard, very clever comments, I enjoyed them very much. Thanks for the visit too~ Warren

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/18/2021 3:36:00 PM

I see your perspective --truly original, Warren. Well done.

Warren Doll
Date: 3/20/2021 6:08:00 AM

Vijay, thanks for your positive comments and visit~ Warren

Mike Gentile

Date: 3/9/2021 6:56:00 AM

Such an interesting viewpoint Warren. I never thought of it that way and it rings true! Nice piece !!

Warren Doll
Date: 3/11/2021 9:53:00 AM

Mike, I'm glad that you liked it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/8/2021 2:04:00 PM

love your way of seeing it. It's so true!

Warren Doll
Date: 3/11/2021 9:51:00 AM

Andrea, thanks so much,

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/3/2021 3:26:00 PM

True, every dwelling is part of the outside of this creation and this is a creative poem. Well done Warren :)

Warren Doll
Date: 3/4/2021 7:36:00 AM

Hi Heidi, Thanks so much for your visit and positive comments. All the best~ Warren

Eve Roper

Date: 2/28/2021 7:52:00 PM

Warren, I am confused on the concept of the inside out. I am just grateful I do have a home to keep me warm and have the beauty of the outside world. Thank you for your visit on my poem, “ Harbinger Birds of Spring” and leaving a wonderful compliment. Hugs Eve

Warren Doll
Date: 3/2/2021 8:18:00 AM

Hi Eve, so good to hear from you. Basically, in my poem, I'm just saying that what we call inside is in reality outside space that is enclosed. Calling it inside doesn't alter this fact. Good luck with the contest. All the best~ Warren