Inside of the Inside

the apartment and its furniture
there are quiet ones by themselves.
everything takes its place
and my reflection in the window glass
it just looks like a bug to look at.
here only the wind moves as it wants,
the rains have washed it all away,
and the dust that resists
helped time to stagnate.
before the doldrums of these hours
I carefully swept away what I was,
now I look at myself thrown in the rubble
and I don't even know 
what name should i give to it
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Agustin Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 3:35 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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