Inside Myself

Inside my gnawing self a realm spills down through the meadows, wild garlands reached by fingers from afar… the hues, soft pastel brushing across winds on floats so stunning I could taste the stamen in my wet mouth and there, a primitive choir of animals chants of radiant praise for a season as my palms ripple upon the glass of another earth, the mist of day nibbling the flakes from my eyes light turning red, night fading white licking stems of twilight dew, as if the shadows of all constellations rise like giant stones, beautiful and silent, piled up in a row lining into heaven... I walk inside my realm, nestled inside my quiet, contained self © PEACE *During an artists’ fellowship last weekend, I printed this piece on 45 reams of art paper and distributed it to my colleagues in the form of scrolls. Our discussion on embracing peace in a world riddled with hostility allowed me to share my thoughts,"let peace begin with me..." , ,,,,,,,,,, for Cyndi MacMillan’s Great Soup Poetry Extravaganza by nette onclaud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 6/30/2012 3:22:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 6/29/2012 1:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your 1st Place win in Cyndi's "Great Soup Release" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/29/2012 11:22:00 AM
Nette, congrats on your win..David
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Date: 6/29/2012 7:56:00 AM
congrats Nette luv on a grand first place win with this stunning write only u can pen luv.. working on an entry for u today.. will check sm too in case .. haha.. luv..
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Date: 6/20/2012 8:01:00 PM
Excellent poem on peace.Love it Nette.Visit my poem "Remembering your lost love again".
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Date: 6/20/2012 2:58:00 PM
I think many things begin with you Nette not to mention your amazing ability with words. Cyndi will love this as I do so all the best in the contest my dear> LOve, Lizzie
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Date: 6/20/2012 10:36:00 AM
Exceptional poem read now, wish you best of luck in the contest. Loved always, bl
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Date: 6/19/2012 7:38:00 PM
Wish I was there to receive one of your scrolls ! Awesome write dear poet ! have a wonderful week Nette.....much love, james
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Date: 6/19/2012 3:08:00 PM
This is a wondrous write Nette! I really enjoyed the last stanza you wrote! The following two lines are perfect, "like giant stones, beautiful and silent, piled up in a row lining into heaven..." wow, very special there my friend! You are a poet genius! I loved getting a glimpse of what's inside you Nette, quite the glorious sight! What an incredible poem! Great Work!!
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Date: 6/19/2012 2:53:00 PM
Beautiful images, and sentiments... Good luck in the contest... it's bound to be highly placed...Terry (and thanks for your kind commet on 'Bitterness')
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Date: 6/19/2012 12:41:00 PM
Now I know both inside and outside of you nette.....:)....Well done. - Thank you for sharing some Candy with me, remember to brush your teeth. - Wish you luck in contest. - oxox hugggs Anne-Lise
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