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Inside My Head

Now that she's...got inside, my head 
Implanting, everything...she said 
She kind...of left me, out for dead 
Now, my eyes...all I see, is red 

Forget about...all the tears, I've shed 
How 'bout...all the blood...I've bled 
Perhaps, it was, just all...her med 
That put, our love, our one...to bed 

'Fore, was such...a life, we've led 
Even 'fore, we both...had wed 
Presumed this day, would come...I'd dread 
Just can't believe, how fast, our time...it sped

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 1/21/2021 12:37:00 PM
Enjoyed the style of this with all the timely pauses and mono rhymes. Effective with emotions.
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Date: 1/13/2021 11:48:00 AM
Hello Charles Messina, so sorry your love has gone wrong. Charles sometimes love is one sided. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 1/13/2021 4:48:00 AM
So sad... beautiful words, Charlie. God Bless you always
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Date: 1/13/2021 3:13:00 AM
It is hard to get the thoughts of our heads we try to ignore at times. Charles, great flow and rhyme. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/12/2021 8:25:00 PM
Hello charles … you wrote this poem well using the rhyme throughout - a job well done charles - Lindsay
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