Inside

Inside me and the stars and everything I see and those things I don’t perceive Lives the universal energy It weaves its way in patterns complex beyond knowing holding every thing together in its Song The Song vibrates through my cells all I have to do is be still listen and then we sing together Harmoniously

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P.M. Richter

Date: 8/31/2022 8:08:00 AM

Beautifully explained :)

Julie Draper
Date: 8/31/2022 10:58:00 AM

Thank you, I'm pleased you enjoyed it :)

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 8/27/2022 8:15:00 PM

A deep spiritual recognition indeed, Julie. As we be to become, with the universe one, what more can we say? Thanks for sharing. Warmest congratulations on your win.

Julie Draper
Date: 8/27/2022 8:25:00 PM

I'm absolutely delighted to have placed in your contest. Thank you very much for your encouraging words :)

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 8/27/2022 11:40:00 AM

Beautiful poem about the universal energy which can be saId to come from the star called the sun - and who created the sun? You are right - Almighty God. Who sustains His entire complex universe? Right again, its Creator God. Not familiar with a divine concept of Song; but indeed music is the univeral language of all nations and creeds. Congratulations on your win, Julie. God is indeed real.

Julie Draper
Date: 8/27/2022 11:55:00 AM

Thanks very much for your kind feedback :)