Julie Draper Poet Free verse

Inside

Inside me
    and the stars
        and everything I see
            and those things I don’t perceive
Lives the universal energy

It weaves its way
    in patterns complex beyond knowing
         holding every thing
             together
               in its Song

The Song vibrates through my cells
      all I have to do is be still
         listen
             and then we sing together
Harmoniously

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Paul Marc August 31, 2022 at 8:08 AM Beautifully explained :) Julie Draper August 31, 2022 at 10:58 AM Thank you, I'm pleased you enjoyed it :)

Unseeking Seeker August 27, 2022 at 8:15 PM A deep spiritual recognition indeed, Julie. As we be to become, with the universe one, what more can we say? Thanks for sharing. Warmest congratulations on your win. Julie Draper August 27, 2022 at 8:25 PM I'm absolutely delighted to have placed in your contest. Thank you very much for your encouraging words :)

Reason A. Poteet August 27, 2022 at 11:40 AM Beautiful poem about the universal energy which can be saId to come from the star called the sun - and who created the sun? You are right - Almighty God. Who sustains His entire complex universe? Right again, its Creator God. Not familiar with a divine concept of Song; but indeed music is the univeral language of all nations and creeds. Congratulations on your win, Julie. God is indeed real. Julie Draper August 27, 2022 at 11:55 AM Thanks very much for your kind feedback :)