Inseparable

When you gently hug me, it feels so good that in that moment, I'm ready to die. For selfless love always feels like love should, and it makes me want to break down and cry. Gazing into my eyes, you summon smiles: as a flood of happy tears starts to swell. And I forget life's hurdles and trials, for when I am in your arms, all is well. You make me feel loved and completely whole, for our two half souls are a perfect fit. And lovers that share one heart and one soul, are indivisible and can't be split. Inseparable, we are bound as one, with eternal knots that can't be undone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Gauthier Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 3:07 PM
Lovely poem, Emile. Love the second line "in that moment I'm ready to die" shows the depth of love - beautifully expressed epitome. A love that soothes "life's hurts and trials".
Pinet Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 5:33 PM
Thanks Line, all of your comments are appreciated my friend, Emile.
Viswan Bhatia Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 10:48 AM
whoaaa....wonderful take on the contest.. Congrats Emile.. :) god bless ~7~
Pinet Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 11:29 AM
Thank Remnants, your support is appreciated. Emile.
Dutta Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 10:21 AM
Nice and romantic. Congrats Emile to win first place. Best wishes Anisha D
Pinet Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 11:28 AM
Thank you Anisha, your support is appreciated. Emile.
Ebbs Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 8:01 AM
This is sweet, and beautiful...congrats on your win!
Pinet Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 8:44 AM
Thank you Edward, your support is appreciated. Emile.
Inman Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 7:21 AM
Beautifully stated Emile.
Pinet Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 8:43 AM
Thank you so much James, your encouraging words are welcome. Emile.
Tor Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 12:46 AM
Emile excellent win !! It was my favorite!
Pinet Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 8:43 AM
Thanks Michael, your encouraging words are most appreciated. Emile.
A  Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 12:22 AM
Hi Emile,, Congratulations on your awesome number one placement. ThanXs for supporting my contest. <3 Love SKAT
Pinet Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 8:41 AM
Thank you so much SKAT the opportunity, your encouraging words are inspiring. Emile.
A. Sharma Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 11:24 PM
Congrats on ur superb win with this awesome write Emile!
Pinet Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 7:29 AM
Thanks Upma, your encouraging support is most valued. Emile.
Haight Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 4:07 PM
Heartfelt and beautiful, Emile. Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win. Sandra
Pinet Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 4:13 PM
Thanks again Sandra, your support is greatly appreciated. Emile.
Y. Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 2:39 AM
Emile,Congratulations on your 1st place win. :-)Alexis
Pinet Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 7:49 AM
Thanks Alexis, your support is greatly appreciated. Emile.
Cheema Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 1:30 AM
Congrats Emile! A loving sonnet on appreciation and reciprocating to love! Balveen
Pinet Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 7:51 AM
Thanks Balveen, your support is greatly appreciated. Emile.
Scars Avatar
October 31, 2015 at 10:23 PM
Wonderful entry for the contest.. Well deserved win, absolutely beautiful.. :) -LU Be blessed
Pinet Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 7:53 AM
Thanks so much Laura, your encouragement and support is greatly appreciated. Emile.
Tor Avatar
October 31, 2015 at 8:14 PM
Emile wonderful poem. love this. It is so heartfelt. a deserving win my friend. Being really busy lately working full time and playing in a classic Rock N Roll band. Stay well my friend this is one of my favorites.
Pinet Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 7:55 AM
Thanks Michael, your friendship and encouraging comments are most welcome, good luck with your music, I'm sure you sound great. Emile.
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April 16, 2015 at 6:59 PM
Excellent pen Emile! I truly enjoyed your excellent sonnet, dear friend.Thank you for visiting my page.A 7 from me!Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light! God bless you! :) D."
Pinet Avatar
April 17, 2015 at 8:12 AM
Thanks Dorian, your continued support is appreciated. Emile.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
April 15, 2015 at 8:49 AM
:)! romantic and sweet.. :)!! lovely Emile.. I wish to experience this soon if my man has such treatment with me.. :)//olive eloisa
Pinet Avatar
April 15, 2015 at 5:53 PM
Thanks so much Olive, I wish you the best and hope you find true love waiting for you. Emile.
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April 15, 2015 at 6:47 AM
truly beautiful pen emile bless you wishing you a lovely week pal
Pinet Avatar
April 15, 2015 at 7:22 AM
Thanks so much Liam, your friendly words are heart warming. Emile.
Das Avatar
April 14, 2015 at 9:10 PM
What a beautiful sonnet this is! Poetry at its finest.#7.
Pinet Avatar
April 15, 2015 at 7:24 AM
Thank you so much Nandita, your encouraging words are inspiring. Emile.
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