Insecurity

"My pen drips of sorrow and on this paper, I write each tear"

 

My life unfolds,i deflect love, braver face is worn
for top surface, iron armour,beneath dwelling cashmere
pantomine performed,staging through all acts
inside crying attention for love,outside the mask.


Deep deep, amongst depths of insecurity
conversational flow lacking,o frustratingly yearn normality
pent up tensions,no outlet,i just cry
there`s more unfortunate people, decaying in this world.

Paul Beadnall for

Sponsor Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet ~  

14/8/11.
Contest Name Just Write
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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K. Avatar
August 16, 2011 at 10:49 AM
Congrats, Paul on your win here, yes sometimes we seem to neglect seeing our very own blessings; how sad indeed as well that we hide behind masks, very thought-provoking poem...
Beadnall Avatar
August 16, 2011 at 1:04 PM
Thanks very much for your positive comment.. Blessings Paul
Horne Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 2:31 PM
Many congratulations on all your wins, Paul : )
Beadnall Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 4:23 PM
Thanks Jack, always appreciated blessings Paul
Onclaud Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 11:54 AM
smashing me, paul.. a brief but rich shout-out of congrats on your glowing win before soup knocks me off.. awhhh! huggs :) :)
Beadnall Avatar
August 26, 2011 at 9:40 PM
So sorry, i`ve just realised that i called you Carol ahahhaah ! sorry blessing from Paul. I better go and av a look what i`ve called Carol ahaha
Beadnall Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 11:55 AM
Thanks very much Carol always appreciated ...Blessings
Brown Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 10:28 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Constance's "Just Write" contest Paul. Love, Carol
Beadnall Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 4:22 PM
Thanks Carol always appreciated blessings Paul
Johnson Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 2:26 AM
A world full of sorrow. Congratulaitons Paul. Love, Joyce
Beadnall Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 5:24 AM
Thanks very much,Joyce.Not sorrow now, was reitterating a time of my life when feelings were really at a low ebb. Blessings Paul
Sweetheart Avatar
August 14, 2011 at 11:07 PM
Congrats Paul on a tremendous win and write for this contest luv.. enjoy..
Beadnall Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 5:32 AM
Thanks very much Linda-Marie for your kind comment.Blessings Paul.
Long Avatar
August 14, 2011 at 10:49 PM
congrats on your win with this gem cory
Beadnall Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 5:34 AM
Thanks alot ,Cory.Blessings Paul
Ross Jr. Avatar
August 14, 2011 at 9:20 PM
Beautiful sad descriptive emotional flowing write Mate...GOOD ON YOU PAUL I SAY!!!!!! WITH LOVE CRAZY OLD JACK......YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!..............GOOD LUCK ON CONTEST RAH RAH RASS KICK IN THE ARSE.......LMAO.........YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Beadnall Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 5:39 AM
CHEERS MATE,YA SOUND LIKE A HOOLIGAN AHAHA .. BLESSING OLD JACK , PAUL
Sweetheart Avatar
August 14, 2011 at 5:19 PM
an exquisite entry Paul..much success in the contest .. a great title luv..
Beadnall Avatar
August 14, 2011 at 6:08 PM
Thanks alot Linda-Marie. Appreciated as always...Blessings
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