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Insecurity

"My pen drips of sorrow and on this paper, I write each tear" My life unfolds,i deflect love, braver face is worn for top surface, iron armour,beneath dwelling cashmere pantomine performed,staging through all acts inside crying attention for love,outside the mask. Deep deep, amongst depths of insecurity conversational flow lacking,o frustratingly yearn normality pent up tensions,no outlet,i just cry there`s more unfortunate people, decaying in this world. Paul Beadnall for Sponsor Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet ~ 14/8/11. Contest Name Just Write

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 8/16/2011 10:49:00 AM

Congrats, Paul on your win here, yes sometimes we seem to neglect seeing our very own blessings; how sad indeed as well that we hide behind masks, very thought-provoking poem...

Paul Beadnall
Date: 8/16/2011 1:04:00 PM

Thanks very much for your positive comment.. Blessings Paul

Jack Horne

Date: 8/15/2011 2:31:00 PM

Many congratulations on all your wins, Paul : )

Paul Beadnall
Date: 8/15/2011 4:23:00 PM

Thanks Jack, always appreciated blessings Paul

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/15/2011 11:54:00 AM

smashing me, paul.. a brief but rich shout-out of congrats on your glowing win before soup knocks me off.. awhhh! huggs :) :)

Paul Beadnall
Date: 8/26/2011 9:40:00 PM

So sorry, i`ve just realised that i called you Carol ahahhaah ! sorry blessing from Paul. I better go and av a look what i`ve called Carol ahaha

Paul Beadnall
Date: 8/15/2011 11:55:00 AM

Thanks very much Carol always appreciated ...Blessings

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/15/2011 10:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Constance's "Just Write" contest Paul. Love, Carol

Paul Beadnall
Date: 8/15/2011 4:22:00 PM

Thanks Carol always appreciated blessings Paul

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/15/2011 2:26:00 AM

A world full of sorrow. Congratulaitons Paul. Love, Joyce

Paul Beadnall
Date: 8/15/2011 5:24:00 AM

Thanks very much,Joyce.Not sorrow now, was reitterating a time of my life when feelings were really at a low ebb. Blessings Paul

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/14/2011 11:07:00 PM

Congrats Paul on a tremendous win and write for this contest luv.. enjoy..

Paul Beadnall
Date: 8/15/2011 5:32:00 AM

Thanks very much Linda-Marie for your kind comment.Blessings Paul.

Cory Long

Date: 8/14/2011 10:49:00 PM

congrats on your win with this gem cory

Paul Beadnall
Date: 8/15/2011 5:34:00 AM

Thanks alot ,Cory.Blessings Paul

Jack Ross Jr.

Date: 8/14/2011 9:20:00 PM

Beautiful sad descriptive emotional flowing write Mate...GOOD ON YOU PAUL I SAY!!!!!! WITH LOVE CRAZY OLD JACK......YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!..............GOOD LUCK ON CONTEST RAH RAH RASS KICK IN THE ARSE.......LMAO.........YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Paul Beadnall
Date: 8/15/2011 5:39:00 AM

CHEERS MATE,YA SOUND LIKE A HOOLIGAN AHAHA .. BLESSING OLD JACK , PAUL

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/14/2011 5:19:00 PM

an exquisite entry Paul..much success in the contest .. a great title luv..

Paul Beadnall
Date: 8/14/2011 6:08:00 PM

Thanks alot Linda-Marie. Appreciated as always...Blessings