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Reading scary poems on poetry soup Heard a sound unfamiliar too boot Jumped up from the desk chair and there In the kitchen the big mouth had legs rare Just like the tin man in "The Wizard Of Oz" It had legs that moved, arms, and wings that was For a split second I thought I heard him sing Calm, calm imagination gone wild no longer a child This isn't a thing just an optical illusion I really hated the intrusion (into my insanity) (Couplet--Sorta)

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Date: 11/5/2009 2:51:00 PM
Sometimes inspiration flows outwared like it rain flows downward on a warm day. This poem shows much creativeness ... Liked it.
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Date: 10/26/2009 3:58:00 AM
kick it thast amazing, kickin up dust x loves it
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Date: 10/25/2009 1:08:00 PM
i love this poem^.^ reminds me of myself sometimes. -Always Lynette
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Date: 10/20/2009 4:31:00 PM
creative fun! Sara! well done! and thank you for your kind comments, jim
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Date: 10/20/2009 3:19:00 PM
Hi, Sara! I love your humor and wit in your lovely Couplet. Suspense and mystery adds to the illusion. Great poem! Keep up the good work! Thanks for your comments on my poetry. Good luck with your writing. Warmest Regards, Andrew.
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Date: 10/20/2009 12:03:00 PM
Sara, this is a delightfully scary and witty read! Ah yes, the Halloween season is upon us! Wonderful work! Love, Robin
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Date: 10/20/2009 10:58:00 AM
Clever., ..enjoyed mucho. If you aren't familiar with Vincent Price, aren't familiar with his movies filmed after the novels of E. Poe, then you are very young. Oh, to be young again. Love, daver
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Date: 10/20/2009 9:38:00 AM
Remarkable experiance Sara. You just about scared me, and I wasn't even there.Lol Thanks for sharing also the humor, in this remarkable write. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 10/20/2009 8:15:00 AM
Sara, very nice but scary! Thanks for the humor this Monday a.m! Peace, Ladybug12 P.S. Thanks for your comments on my work. I truly appreciate all your kind comments!
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