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Ins and outs, roundabout twirls

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Breath in, breath out the tide ebbs in, and surges out, flows and pauses. Swings and seesaws rock, bounce and rebound, up and down, in tick-tock metronome time. Memories tug, get hugged, then unclasp, withdraw and let go to fade. Dreams materialize, then dissolve. Laughter spits, splits, spills, gushes out, echoes then wanes to abstain in a chuckle. Hope flits and flickers like a candle flame blown to quiver by a shaky breath expelled while trying to blow the flame of a birthday candle out. For the cadence of existence is a hymn tuned by a conductor's baton a metric dance, set in a tango two-time step, a soft-shoe tap rap in between yesterday and tomorrow, in between blinks, breath holds. Nestled momentarily on-hold to pause, in between the tugs and shoves of feelings, emotions, hopes, inspiration faith and desire. Hold your breath, for a brief moment. Take time to take in all the ins and outs, and the roundabout twirls, that surround you, while you go with the flow.

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