Innocent Beauty

Young
maidens
in the park-
nature splashed with
joy





http://www.augustmacke.org/Girls-In-The-Forest.html
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Moreno Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 11:46 PM
Beautifully written, nice ekphrasis, a joy to read. I'll have to see the link...Raul
Bowen Avatar
March 25, 2009 at 11:29 AM
Another hitter for you Brian!~ I like the young maidens as natrue is splashed with joy! THE ENTIRE PIECE...a Ekphrasis...WOW! Well done sir....very inticing and intriguing!~(spelling) I'm getting inspired to start writing one...I like trying new types of poetry..! It's nice to have so many fine poets in one place! You are a natural talent as a poet Brian...it's good work! ....Thanks for your inspiration friend, always your friend here at the soupie~! Janers
Townsend Avatar
March 24, 2009 at 5:10 AM
Beautiful description. Thank you for bringing another beautiful work of art into our lives. Smiles from Lolita
Gass Avatar
March 23, 2009 at 5:44 PM
This is a perfect description of this painting, Brian. I really enjoyed viewing his beautifful work. Thank you for sharing! Love, Robin
Winter Avatar
March 23, 2009 at 2:36 PM
And splashed with such vibrant color! Innocent beauty indeed, so well captured in poem and painting. Love, Shar
Mcmullin Avatar
March 23, 2009 at 1:17 PM
ARTISTIC, as well!!!!!! poet butterfly
Mckenzie Avatar
March 23, 2009 at 1:10 PM
Brian what a lovely write to such a colorful painting! You did the artist proud! Laura :)
Atanacio Avatar
March 23, 2009 at 11:30 AM
perfect
Gorelick Avatar
March 23, 2009 at 9:40 AM
This is a lovely painting..hadnt thought of it in a while..it really is a joyful thing. BG
Ehigiator Avatar
March 23, 2009 at 9:10 AM
Brian, this is wonderful, I've seen this painting and you really brought this to life..The title is very fitting..Indeed they are innocent beauties just enjoying a beautiful summer day in the park. Loved the picture here...Great Job...GB, Tyesha
Shango Avatar
March 23, 2009 at 8:55 AM
When I heard Mr. Ayers music, only this poem define what came to me. Thanks for inspiration again, my friend. Love
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