Innocence of Eloise

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How elfin her beauty, sweet innocence on the face of my grandchild who always runs into my embrace. For a week while I visited, at the first rays of morn, she tumbled into my bed as if a dandelion, airborne. "Nana," she would softly whisper, "Are you awake?" As if I wouldn't be by then, "Wanna play pattycake?" "Yes, ma petite, but first I must have a great big hug." She squeezed tight, this sprite I called my 'Ladybug.' The time we spend together, much too quickly ends. I fell in love with this child, who comes with dividends. She made scones for me, served on tiny China plates. Surely, you can see why I never refuse her playdates. When she smiles at me and puts her hand in mine... my maternal emotions take hold, by God's design. I take pictures as Eloise reminds me to say, "Cheese." Then she has to take one of me. "Can I, Nana. Please?" I can't deny this fae child, even a star from the skies And if you need a reason why, just look into her eyes That puppy dog expression evinces innocence to me To be a child of three again, when life was so carefree.

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Date: 11/11/2023 3:35:00 PM
Truly a sweet poem about, what I'm sure is, a sweet "fae" child Lin :)
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Date: 11/11/2023 3:38:00 PM
Thank you, Jeff. She has a sweet disposition and a ready smile. I'm proud of her parents for raising her to be such a charming child.
Date: 11/11/2023 2:19:00 PM
Lin, love your Eloise poem, she is a gift and you are to her as well. I will forever have fond memories of my grandparents.
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Date: 11/11/2023 3:25:00 PM
Thank you so much, Tania. We bonded immediately since I had her 4 days a week from one month until she was 11 months because of the Pandemic. It was too risky to send her anywhere. I'm lucky to have two PS friends to share my girls, and grandson with every day. Hugs.
Date: 11/11/2023 10:27:00 AM
This is adorable on so many counts Lin I just love my updates and pictures of your gorgeous grandchildren. Hope you print this one out and frame it for her:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/11/2023 3:23:00 PM
You've been my friend long before Elle was born, Jan. Now, always writing to me, "Send more pictures!" And I do... Thanks for caring about my sweetlings, chick. Hugs.
Date: 11/11/2023 10:17:00 AM
Thank you for this loving sweet poem.
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Date: 11/11/2023 10:23:00 AM
Hi Hilda. Thank you for reading me and responding with such a kind remark.
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