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Ink - Poi

Sorrows slowly release
internal inflictions to
form poetic mouthpiece

Revealing what's true
Narrating through verse
Expressing your view

Life can immerse
Killing your peace
Let words disperse

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Tonye George Date: 6/22/2024 6:38:00 AM Back with Congratulations Dear Silent one. A lovely piece. Login to Reply

Terry Miller Date: 6/21/2024 8:06:00 AM Excellent take on the contest, congratulations Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 6/20/2024 5:22:00 AM I enjoyed reading your winner. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your creativity with us. Sara K Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/19/2024 4:31:00 PM Clever! Congrats on 2nd place! Login to Reply

Hilo Poet Date: 6/19/2024 9:32:00 AM At the end of each day's challenge, darkness weighs for memories to lighten their load, my friend. Aloha, Silent One, for your participation, William Login to Reply

I Am Anaya Date: 6/2/2024 4:11:00 PM A lovely display using the word, and tool, a natural poet needs to express himself. A pleasure to read SO. Login to Reply

Ink Empress Date: 6/2/2024 1:17:00 AM I love your chosen word ink, and i love how youv written this poem , although im not sure how it should be done, i think you must have done an excellent job writing this! I especially love the lines “ Revealing what's true Narrating through verse Expressing your view” exactly what we do through ink and poetry! Youv defined it so seamlessly! I think this is one of the best iv read for this contest! For not just the flow of lines but also for how it can resonate with so many! Best wishes Login to Reply

Duke Beaufort Date: 6/1/2024 8:13:00 AM SO, the middle verse seems more benign to me than verses 1 and 3. However, verses 1 and 3 seems to indicate what we can do about all the feelings we have. There are sometimes some wonderful things that inspire us as well, and we hope to have many of those. We're fortunate to have a means to express it all and you do so with such fine skill that it brings a smile to my inner being. Login to Reply

Yann Rolland Date: 5/29/2024 10:47:00 PM beautiful and subtle, enjoyed yann Login to Reply

Paige Hind Date: 5/27/2024 6:27:00 PM Very true and powerful, enjoyed reading Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 5/27/2024 6:05:00 AM Enjoyed very much! Our human experience gives us our poetic voice fraught with suffering (and joy). Poetry is indeed cathartic. God bless ~ Kim Login to Reply

Maria Williams Date: 5/27/2024 5:02:00 AM Nicely done S1. Good luck in the contest...Hugs Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 5/27/2024 1:30:00 AM I found this contest difficult as I tend to be verbose. You should your mettle in writing such a poem. Best for a win. Login to Reply

Tonye George Date: 5/26/2024 2:55:00 PM Yeah! That's how we feel our pain and probably try to heal. To create something out of it. The fact that we pen them could make it be there forever but as time crawls we could measure how far we have come and how healed we have become. Lovely piece Silent. Login to Reply