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For hilo Poet's Intro Poi-etry contest

Sorrows slowly release internal inflictions to form poetic mouthpiece Revealing what's true Narrating through verse Expressing your view Life can immerse Killing your peace Let words disperse

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Tonye George

Date: 6/22/2024 6:38:00 AM

Back with Congratulations Dear Silent one. A lovely piece.

Terry Miller

Date: 6/21/2024 8:06:00 AM

Excellent take on the contest, congratulations

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/20/2024 5:22:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your winner. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your creativity with us. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/19/2024 4:31:00 PM

Clever! Congrats on 2nd place!

Hilo Poet

Date: 6/19/2024 9:32:00 AM

At the end of each day's challenge, darkness weighs for memories to lighten their load, my friend. Aloha, Silent One, for your participation, William

I Am Anaya

Date: 6/2/2024 4:11:00 PM

A lovely display using the word, and tool, a natural poet needs to express himself. A pleasure to read SO.

Ink Empress

Date: 6/2/2024 1:17:00 AM

I love your chosen word ink, and i love how youv written this poem , although im not sure how it should be done, i think you must have done an excellent job writing this! I especially love the lines “ Revealing what's true Narrating through verse Expressing your view” exactly what we do through ink and poetry! Youv defined it so seamlessly! I think this is one of the best iv read for this contest! For not just the flow of lines but also for how it can resonate with so many! Best wishes

Duke Beaufort

Date: 6/1/2024 8:13:00 AM

SO, the middle verse seems more benign to me than verses 1 and 3. However, verses 1 and 3 seems to indicate what we can do about all the feelings we have. There are sometimes some wonderful things that inspire us as well, and we hope to have many of those. We're fortunate to have a means to express it all and you do so with such fine skill that it brings a smile to my inner being.

Yann Rolland

Date: 5/29/2024 10:47:00 PM

beautiful and subtle, enjoyed yann

Paige Hind

Date: 5/27/2024 6:27:00 PM

Very true and powerful, enjoyed reading

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/27/2024 6:05:00 AM

Enjoyed very much! Our human experience gives us our poetic voice fraught with suffering (and joy). Poetry is indeed cathartic. God bless ~ Kim

Maria Williams

Date: 5/27/2024 5:02:00 AM

Nicely done S1. Good luck in the contest...Hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/27/2024 1:30:00 AM

I found this contest difficult as I tend to be verbose. You should your mettle in writing such a poem. Best for a win.

Tonye George

Date: 5/26/2024 2:55:00 PM

Yeah! That's how we feel our pain and probably try to heal. To create something out of it. The fact that we pen them could make it be there forever but as time crawls we could measure how far we have come and how healed we have become. Lovely piece Silent.

Mat Ignacio

Date: 5/26/2024 10:38:00 AM

I like the flow of this - meditative, introspective, thoughtful - well said

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/26/2024 9:13:00 AM

oh, wow...nicely done. Best wishes with this unique contest. Enjoy your day, Sara