Initials

Initials I remember carving a heart with our initials in the trunk of this old oak tree we used to sit under and dream After all of the years the bark has grown over and our initials are no longer visible Running my fingers over the area I look back on those dreams and it feels as if it were just yesterday I often wonder about you, are you happy, do you ever think of us and this old tree "They are still there" I hear as I turn to see you smiling at me just the way I remember "The bark has only grown over to keep them safe, they will be there forever" (I guess that answers my question) "Hi, how have you been, it's been a long time. I've missed you"

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Sandra Adams

Date: 8/27/2019 6:20:00 PM

sometimes going back in memories and reliving the better times makes us smile from within.... so cool to think of how the initials would look many years later... faded or deeper, guess it depends on the original depth of them... nice poem! Enjoyed this one! :) hugs

Chris Green
Date: 8/28/2019 7:39:00 AM

Thanks so much Sandy. I am happy you liked this.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/28/2017 1:11:00 AM

I do believe..every now and then She'll think of you.and those initials carved in the trunk in a sweet nostalgic way...We always think of all the ones we loved before at times...and at times some people are more precious than others...A favourite..I have asoft spor for tree trunks and love...Everyone has his her own memory.

Chris Green
Date: 1/30/2017 8:54:00 AM

I guess that's all we can hope for, that one we loved in the past will think about us from time to time. Thank you for your wonderful comments my sweet friend.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/26/2017 3:30:00 PM

I love this, Chris! When I went to a school reunion, a guy that I knew talked to me and gave me a hug. (Not the same feelings as i'm married) but I thought how I would have died for that hug back in school...lol (I was very shy back then but you would never guess that today!)

Chris Green
Date: 1/26/2017 4:04:00 PM

I've been to one of those as well Kim and I know EXACTLY what you are talking about. :) Thanks for stopping by for a visit today.

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/26/2017 3:18:00 PM

Hi Chris, What a beautiful love story. That would be something to be reunited with an old love in a that special place, that meant so much. Well done. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis

Chris Green
Date: 1/26/2017 4:03:00 PM

Thank you my sweet friend. It is something that would definitely create a smile, that's for sure. I am happy you liked this one.

Tim Smith

Date: 1/26/2017 3:09:00 PM

A true love story.

Chris Green
Date: 1/26/2017 4:02:00 PM

Thanks so very much Tim.

Phil Capitano

Date: 1/26/2017 3:01:00 PM

A chance meeting under an oak tree, how romantic. Good one. (PS: I don't believe in coincidence, all things are written in time)

Chris Green
Date: 1/26/2017 4:02:00 PM

Thanks so much my friend, everything happens as it is planned. :)