Inherent Abilities

He awakened each morning-
  To the winnowing train whistle,
    And the glowing appearance of a day-
     Undeniably fitting of summer;
       The heavens yet lingered pink,
         Unlocked screen doors ~ sturdy in nature,
           The aroma of freshly baked bread pervading-
             Throughout the old coal-mining town,
               Carefully prepared peanut butter 
                 Sandwiches by the dozen;
                   Eighteen clumsy, bright-eyed boys-
                     Huddled at the dusty patch field ~ Isabella ~
                       Undoubted innocence ~ children of joy ~ 
                          Without decoration ~
                            Only freckled faces, Wrangler blue jeans-
                              And sneakers, crew cuts and striped t-shirts ~
                                Without numbers;
                                  Blasphemous parents were obscure,
                                     No policemen to summon ~
                                       Playing ball until the soft fingertips-
                                         Of the radiant sun caressed the blue moon,
                                           Dashing home before the curfew puffed,
                                             Only to begin...again,
                                                Four home runs today,
                                                  The Natural ~
                                                     No fortune ~ no fame,
                                                       Simply perfect passion for the game.


                                                          Written for my dad, Paul Redzanic, Jr.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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Rhinem Avatar
September 30, 2013 at 6:24 AM
........................."Ps., I Remember This Poe, It Seems Like Yesterday ˜ Twas A Bit As My Own Childhood, With My Brothers, Etc.,..I Love You Baby *:*(*
Rhinem Avatar
September 30, 2013 at 6:20 AM
† I Miss You Tami. Where Has Your Beauty Been, Baby ? Sweet Kisses, Always, My Love, John *
Stimmell Avatar
October 15, 2012 at 10:59 AM
Beautiful. Shows the deserving respect of a great father.
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