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inhale

It’s like— the world pauses. Not a full stop, no, just a breath. A comma in time, a sliver of space. Inhale. Feel it— how it sinks low, how it rises slow, like the tide kissing the shore then pulling away, retreating into itself. And the air, it’s like— it fills you up but leaves you empty, holds you close but keeps its distance. It whispers, "You’re here, you’re now, you’re fine." Exhale. And everything softens. It’s like— you’re lighter than you were before, like you shed something, something heavy and sharp, and now you’re floating, somewhere between the earth and the clouds, but you’re not lost, you’re just— drifting. Inhale again, like pulling in pieces of peace, small fragments of stillness you didn’t know were missing. And the world is spinning but you’re not. Not anymore. You’re just— breathing.

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Date: 9/23/2024 11:18:00 PM
Yes, I came back to read again, lovely!
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Ariana Pataki
Date: 10/12/2024 11:16:00 AM
Sorry for the late reply. I'm delighted to know that you came to re-read my poem! Means a lot to me!!
Date: 9/8/2024 7:57:00 AM
Dear Ariana, I enjoyed your beautiful meditation and lovely expression of the duality of the breath. A celebration of mindful serenity! Splendid poetry. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Ariana Pataki
Date: 9/15/2024 3:35:00 AM
I'm so glad you enjoyed it Susan. A clear mind and an open heart are the way to happiness! Hugs, Ariana.
Date: 9/8/2024 12:17:00 AM
Beautiful poetry!
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Ariana Pataki
Date: 9/15/2024 3:34:00 AM
Thank you very much!

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