inhale

It’s like—  
the world pauses.  
Not a full stop, no,  
just a breath.  
A comma in time,  
a sliver of space.  
  
Inhale.  
Feel it—  
how it sinks low,  
how it rises slow,  
like the tide kissing the shore  
then pulling away,  
retreating into itself.  
  
And the air,  
it’s like—  
it fills you up but leaves you empty,  
holds you close but keeps its distance.  
It whispers,  
"You’re here, you’re now, you’re fine."

Exhale.  
And everything softens.  
It’s like—  
you’re lighter than you were before,  
like you shed something,  
something heavy and sharp,  
and now you’re floating,  
somewhere between the earth  
and the clouds,  
but you’re not lost,  
you’re just—  
drifting.  
  
Inhale again,  
like pulling in pieces of peace,  
small fragments of stillness  
you didn’t know were missing.  
  
And the world is spinning  
but you’re not.  
Not anymore.  
You’re just—  
breathing.
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Vaso Avatar
September 23, 2024 at 11:18 PM
Yes, I came back to read again, lovely!
Pataki Avatar
October 12, 2024 at 11:16 AM
Sorry for the late reply. I'm delighted to know that you came to re-read my poem! Means a lot to me!!
Ashley Avatar
September 8, 2024 at 7:57 AM
Dear Ariana, I enjoyed your beautiful meditation and lovely expression of the duality of the breath. A celebration of mindful serenity! Splendid poetry. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Pataki Avatar
September 15, 2024 at 3:35 AM
I'm so glad you enjoyed it Susan. A clear mind and an open heart are the way to happiness! Hugs, Ariana.
Vaso Avatar
September 8, 2024 at 12:17 AM
Beautiful poetry!
Pataki Avatar
September 15, 2024 at 3:34 AM
Thank you very much!
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