Inhale

The waves on the shore the salt air calmly dreaming breath deep and inhale.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/19/2021 11:26:00 AM

Hello melani udaeta, it would be wonderful in inhale the ocean or sea. i would like to be by the water listening to the waves rush to shore. enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/20/2021 11:14:00 AM

Hello Melani, I see you do not understand my comment. The sea has a scent that is salty. i love the scent. Whether by the ocean or sea the water is relaxing for me. I like to see and hear the waves rush to the shore. Enjoy your day my friend.

Melani Udaeta
Date: 1/20/2021 6:31:00 AM