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Sweetness and sourness of life depends on the seasoning of emotions. We are blessed with the gift of birth, but our thoughts are processed using different ingredients. We all explore paths to euphoria, but passengers we pass by, sprinkle their own nourishing memories, upon our picnic of existence. Pain persecutes everyone, despite the diversity of gender, colour or faith, but it tastes the same. Yet love is never the same flavour. Romantic aromas can leave bitter side effects. Vibrations of a heart breaking, sound the same, but some cracks are deeper, some wounds heal quicker - some forever remain. Delicacy of regret is one we never forget. It's embroidered on our tongues, reflecting through bitter breaths, as flashbacks echoing in dark corridors, resemble rotting cuisine. Our essence is simply cultivated fodder, within a vulnerable universe, feasting on a substance of snacks, awaiting our best before date. Silent One 13 August 2022

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Joe Maverick

Date: 12/12/2022 9:43:00 AM

A date we can't postpone eh' who'd give a fig For my thought.? Imagination is sometimes Not as varied as the currant...Er not the fruit ) Lol)) ahem..Time I mean.! Not to put to fine a Point on things, in the mean-time..i could go on That should be enough to sober anyone Si.' Si??

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 12/5/2022 12:44:00 PM

I feel we are meant to cross paths with different people in our life to make us who and what we become. Some will have good effects on us and others will teach us lessons we need to learn. Well written. love phyl

I Am Anaya

Date: 12/4/2022 2:20:00 PM

So many experience this during the holiday's, Silent One. "Vibrations of a heart breaking, sound the same, but some cracks are deeper, some wounds heal quicker -some forever remain." True words. Warm Wishes ~Anaya

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 11/20/2022 10:30:00 PM

Silent One, I am surprised I didn't comment in August, but then I remembered that I was not on here for quite a while myself. I've thought of the concept that we are passengers as well, riding along in our people machines, and our existence in this sphere is only for a short time. I'm happy to have at least met you passing through this site! I love your poetry book, and when I am not on-site, and you are rarely on here, I still have your poetry, and think of you, hoping you're well.

Eve Roper

Date: 11/9/2022 6:43:00 PM

So, much truth in your words. Passerbyers & friends we become. taking the sweet & sour of life. Blessings my friend

Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/20/2022 10:20:00 AM

I believe that it is our destiny to cross paths with certain people in our lifetime, both the good and the bad. In the end, this truly makes us who we are... You've given the reader much to ponder on with this interesting poem. Keep up the great writing, my friend!

Robertina B.

Date: 9/12/2022 5:40:00 AM

Such an exquisite gem, Silent One.. Really enjoyed your Masterpiece! Flowed beautifully, my friend.. Many blessings!

Anna Marie Kaianah

Date: 9/7/2022 12:41:00 AM

Creative and amazing write Silent one. ~Anna Kaianah

Mike Gentile

Date: 9/6/2022 4:30:00 AM

Upon my picnic of existence, I am glad Silent One, that you have sprinkled some of the ingredients of yours. I am glad to see you post (albeit passing through) and I wish you peace!! Belated congrats as well!! Happy Tuesday !!

Susan Lawrence

Date: 9/2/2022 7:08:00 PM

SO, You have been missed by many. Your words vibrate in the air as they ring out on the page. Your delicate regret is so poignant as is this rest of this wonderful poem. Congratulations on POTD ! Love your depth of emotion and intellect. Susan :)

Ingrid Showalter Swift

Date: 8/24/2022 11:46:00 AM

O Silent One How I adore the punch line! Awaiting our Best Before Date! Briiiiliant** Lovev the line before it too Feasting on a substance of snacks LOL Wonderful and perfect

Harriet Shea

Date: 8/20/2022 6:08:00 AM

Amazing write Silent One. Very well expressed. Harriet

Harriet Shea

Date: 8/18/2022 8:39:00 PM

Your poetry is amazing silent one. I am back becoming a life time member now that I am back. Take care Harriet Shea (Derena)

Silent One
Date: 8/20/2022 1:29:00 AM

Thank you.. Congratulations on becoming a Lifetime member...

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/18/2022 9:09:00 AM

Bitter tastes can be left with a loved one, unintentionally, but once something nasty is said, there can be no regret, even if it was said in the heat of a moment and results in heart break for the tongue is sharp - some can heal quicker but some never! So let it be never be never, stop, think, then speak. How nice to hear from you my friend. Your visits are luminous and your writes always so humanness SO. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Silent One
Date: 8/20/2022 2:24:00 AM

Thank you Jennifer, always great to hear from you..

Daisy Meadows

Date: 8/17/2022 11:58:00 PM

A good poem. Well written.

Silent One
Date: 8/20/2022 2:24:00 AM

Thanks..

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/16/2022 2:13:00 PM

WoW! Silent, Like always, you have penned such a well-written meaningful write. It's good to see you posting again. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Have a nice day, my friend-Alexis

Silent One
Date: 8/20/2022 2:33:00 AM

Thank you Alexis..

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/16/2022 11:23:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD, dear friend!

Silent One
Date: 8/20/2022 2:33:00 AM

Thank you..

Juliet Ligon

Date: 8/16/2022 7:41:00 AM

Great to see you posting again. Life can be very full and I hope you're doing well. I always enjoy your musings.

Silent One
Date: 8/20/2022 2:34:00 AM

Thank you... you are right..

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 8/15/2022 1:53:00 AM

Back to say congratulations on poem of the day, well done… Belle

Silent One
Date: 8/20/2022 2:38:00 AM

Thank you

Ann Gilmour

Date: 8/14/2022 11:27:00 PM

So many congrats dear Silent One on your POTD, so richly deserved and so lovely to see you again. I do hope all is ok SO. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Silent One
Date: 8/20/2022 3:19:00 AM

Thank you.. Nice to see you.. Hope all is well.

Michael Tor

Date: 8/14/2022 9:31:00 PM

Back to congratulate you Silent One. Your valued Poetry is showcased once again. Come back my friend when you are ready... God be with you...

Silent One
Date: 8/20/2022 3:20:00 AM

Thanks for your continual support.. It is appreciated.

I Am Anaya

Date: 8/14/2022 6:38:00 PM

SO, congratulations on your POTD! "Twilight Aurora" 7/15/17 10481 reads and your first post is just as amazing as this gem. I noticed this under one of the poets comments and I agree with it. (Your note at the end of poem is a bit shocking to read. I never thought such things would be happening here... Seems like humans all over the world are same. education level, age, literature etc. do not bring a change in nature of man. Better ignore) Best ~Anaya

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 8/14/2022 5:01:00 PM

Congratulations on your deep and insightful POTD! I find your stanza beginning : "Vibrations of a heart breaking" etc., really resonate for me. Kudos! :)Paulette

Brandy Nicole

Date: 8/14/2022 4:52:00 PM

Congratulations Silent One, on Poem of the Day. Your words hold depth and meaning. My best to you. ~ Brandy

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 8/14/2022 1:51:00 PM

Congratulations, Dear Poet, on the honour of POTD with your fascinating poem. "Pain persecutes everyone, despite the diversity of.." Love all, especially this outstanding stanza. It's wonderful to see you back! Warm wishes ~ Mala