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Ingredients

[David Kavanagh’s recent poem, ‘Of Infinity’ so astonished me in its similarity to my own pet theory, that I was inspired to finish this poem that I had been struggling to get right.] *** All the ingredients there ever were The atoms of everything ready to stir All of the molecules in you and me Have been in existence since prehistory It’s sheer mathematics it simply must be Our atoms exist in perpetuity All that there was is all that there is And all that there is is all there will be One big Earthly spice rack, our ‘from’ and our ‘to’ Yesterday’s old becomes tomorrow’s new A smidgen of this and a teaspoon of that A pinch and a sprinkle made me… and my cat And when I lay down for my very last time New life will come using bits that were mine Because when we die we return to the rack To season the new with whatever they lack Though space ships go up and there’s asteroid hits Our Earth doesn’t gain or lose that many bits So cave men and mammoths and tyrannosaurs Had bits that are mine and bits that are yours The atoms that make up the grasses and trees The monkeys, the bats, the horses and bees Might one day be water or silver or tin Or even your great, great, great granddaughter’s gin So whether we’re burnt or laid into the ground We’ll be going spare when the time comes around It may be our iron or maybe our salt For all that we are does not become nought We’re made from ingredients from way back when And someday we’ll all be ingredients again And someone that you may have lost in your past Perhaps you’ll rejoin in the same blade of grass

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Date: 11/18/2021 7:11:00 PM
Hello Terry ... how good is this poem. A really fine piece of literature - well done Terry - Lindsay
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Terry Flood
Date: 11/19/2021 6:05:00 AM
Couldn’t decide which if two versions was closest to workable… in the end it was an amalgamation that fixed it. Glad you liked it. Terry
Date: 11/13/2021 2:33:00 PM
wow! you've said so much so well in this poem, terry, that i'm going to read it a few more times to really absorb what you're saying. i love the theory you've put forth here - it all makes sense to me...
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Terry Flood
Date: 11/13/2021 3:10:00 PM
Thanks Ilene. I would never refute or dispute anyone’s belief in their God, it just doesn’t work for me. The thing about my theory is that it doesn’t exclude the notion that he (or she) is measuring the ingredients. Terry
Date: 11/12/2021 10:21:00 AM
Fav'd this one, too! Well said, indeed!
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Date: 11/12/2021 11:46:00 AM
Thanks for the Fave, Rico… appreciated. I was of a mind that this would be blanked, so I’m glad that David’s poem inspired me to get it done. Terry
Date: 11/12/2021 8:40:00 AM
Superb idea and well-written, Terry. Your sense of humor shines through even though your write is serious as can be. It gave me lots of mulling material, and I like that!
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Terry Flood
Date: 11/12/2021 11:43:00 AM
It was nice to write something less slapstick than my usual offerings. It had sat in my files for a week or so… the idea itself for many moons. I had actually written two fairly different versions of the same message. Ultimately, finishing it was mostly a matter of merging verses from each. Glad you enjoyed. Terry
Date: 11/12/2021 5:49:00 AM
Super Terry and definitely not as outlandish as mine, there is real science embedded here described in a philosophical, yet reasonable hypothesis, the blade of grass harbouring and containing past loved ones is genius, personally I hold onto all possibilities, and never discount anything out of hand where infinity is involved, I am humbled that my infinity poem inspired you to finish this piece, cheers and thanks for the mention, David
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Terry Flood
Date: 11/12/2021 11:38:00 AM
Thankyou David. I don’t usually delve so far into the imponderable, but in a response to a poem from Milt, I wrote ‘The Ingredient Strikes Back’… maybe it planted a seed. Terry
Date: 11/12/2021 5:29:00 AM
The great mysteries of creation Terry, you could drive yourself insane trying to fully understand it. Tom
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Date: 11/12/2021 11:30:00 AM
I kinda believe in the Big Bang theory… but what the hell went bang? I’m pretty convinced that the laws of physics actually dictate that ‘nothingness’ is an impossible state… that there never was a beginning or ever could have been. It’s weird, I can’t conceive of it, but without acceptance of it…. Well… ‘Nothing’ simply can’t go bang. After that… us dissolving into so many nutrients seems pretty ordinary. Terry

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