Demetrios Trifiatis Poet Free verse

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" JOY-HAPPINESS-BLISS " MY PHOTO, ©

Ingratitude Vi

For thousands of days he had seen the sun risen for him

Bringing joy,  happiness and even bliss on his way

But 

He - not even for once - had expressed his gratitude 

For 

All these gifts and for the privilege of being alive

And now

That he realises his life to its end comes

In

Desperation begs for one more day

So as 

Amendments to make!







© Demetrios Trifiatis
    09 February 2019

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Sunlite Wanter February 9, 2019 at 6:24 PM A terrible plight for your fellow! Your photo is exquisite! Demetrios Trifiatis February 10, 2019 at 2:02 AM A terrible plight indeed for billions of fellows dearest, Sunlite! Thank you very much!

M. L. Kiser February 9, 2019 at 1:21 PM So many miss the beauty and love around them until facing death rips open their eyes. An excellent pen. Demetrios Trifiatis February 10, 2019 at 2:03 AM Very well explained dearest friend, MLK.! I appreciate your visit!

Tom Cunningham February 9, 2019 at 7:53 AM Too late Demetrios for they have already had their reward. Tom. Demetrios Trifiatis February 9, 2019 at 8:04 AM True my friend, Tom, for life on earth but still heaven is waiting for them! Thank you so much!

Vijay Pandit February 9, 2019 at 7:19 AM We certainly take things for granted..very well said my friend. Those colors are awesome. Demetrios Trifiatis February 9, 2019 at 8:03 AM Regrettably so my friend, Vijay! Thank you for gracious visit and comment!

Supraja Kannan February 9, 2019 at 7:07 AM How true! We take things for granted and often forget to thank. Well said. Demetrios Trifiatis February 9, 2019 at 8:02 AM Thank you dearest, Supraja for your kind visit and comment!