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" JOY-HAPPINESS-BLISS " MY PHOTO, ©

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For thousands of days he had seen the sun risen for him Bringing joy, happiness and even bliss on his way But He - not even for once - had expressed his gratitude For All these gifts and for the privilege of being alive And now That he realises his life to its end comes In Desperation begs for one more day So as Amendments to make! © Demetrios Trifiatis 09 February 2019

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Date: 2/9/2019 6:24:00 PM
A terrible plight for your fellow! Your photo is exquisite!
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Date: 2/10/2019 2:02:00 AM
A terrible plight indeed for billions of fellows dearest, Sunlite! Thank you very much!
Date: 2/9/2019 1:21:00 PM
So many miss the beauty and love around them until facing death rips open their eyes. An excellent pen.
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Date: 2/10/2019 2:03:00 AM
Very well explained dearest friend, MLK.! I appreciate your visit!
Date: 2/9/2019 7:53:00 AM
Too late Demetrios for they have already had their reward. Tom.
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Date: 2/9/2019 8:04:00 AM
True my friend, Tom, for life on earth but still heaven is waiting for them! Thank you so much!
Date: 2/9/2019 7:19:00 AM
We certainly take things for granted..very well said my friend. Those colors are awesome.
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Date: 2/9/2019 8:03:00 AM
Regrettably so my friend, Vijay! Thank you for gracious visit and comment!
Date: 2/9/2019 7:07:00 AM
How true! We take things for granted and often forget to thank. Well said.
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Date: 2/9/2019 8:02:00 AM
Thank you dearest, Supraja for your kind visit and comment!

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