Ingenious

Ingenious, sin deceives by taking right
and warping slight, its plumb no longer true,
till what seems good to man in dub’ous light
is clear maligned, askance, to be eschewed.

Subtle departure from divine decrees
occurs near unperceived through loosened bounds
on that which God ordains, by small degrees,
till far from what is written one is found.

Confusing Father's love with that which sates,
or, willful, grants the creature more accord
till our Creator it subordinates,
thus we turn gifts to that which is abhorred.

The heart, with sin infected, beyond cure,
seeks evil with each beat; detests the pure.

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for the 2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 3 Poetry Contest sponsored by Mark Toney written on 04/30/2022
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Kyser Avatar
June 17, 2022 at 12:02 PM
THIRD PLACE WINNER for the A Brian Strand Premiere Choice Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand written on 04/30/2022
Poteet Avatar
May 5, 2022 at 7:46 PM
Great rendition of the deceptiveness of the gradual. Been studying in Hebrews which mentions: drifting, doubting, dull of hearing, departing, despising and denying as steps towards apostacy. Enjoyed reading your piece along these same lines.
Kyser Avatar
May 5, 2022 at 8:31 PM
Hebrews is wonderful, isn’t it? Thanks for the read and comments
Rodrigues Avatar
May 4, 2022 at 6:32 PM
Well done and the point made well: till our Creator it subordinates - that is not good! Congratulations on trophy win!
Kauffman Avatar
May 4, 2022 at 10:14 AM
Congratulations on your win Jeff. Evil disguises itself as good. Only with God's always available gift of discernment of grace do we discover how we have allowed ourselves to be deceived and see with God's clarity. Very evocative Jeff. Blessings.
Kyser Avatar
May 4, 2022 at 11:23 AM
Thank you Sam, yes, the Spirit is available to us. Many try to lean on their own understanding.
Shaw Avatar
May 1, 2022 at 2:50 AM
A sobering sonnet, for those infected, the pure on them can only hope . . .
Rhymer Avatar
April 30, 2022 at 5:39 PM
Wow Jeff.Wow.
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