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Infused Technicalities

Trapped 'tween 
  adjectives' objections
succumbed to
  long-windedness,
snared 'neath an
  expanse of circumlocution,
paraphrasing periphrases 
   buried under layers
       of infused technicalities, 
all in a day's multiformity
   working midst the sublimity
           of poetry's madness

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Lim'Rik Flats

November 4, 2016 at 11:20 PM

in a roundabout sortaway

Paloma P

November 5, 2016 at 8:50 AM

Which part, the madness? :)

Laura Breidenthal

October 15, 2016 at 9:23 PM

Sometimes longwinded poetry can be overwhelming to the reader. Technicalities and complications can frustrate some and take away from the piece. But ultimately when it is done skillfully, and purposefully, it can have the opposite effect on us---or if it is dissected and explained. Hehe I'm drifting I know, just some thoughts flowing through as I read this. I like your work a lot... it gets my mind going. Keep it up! Speaking of long winded things, I should shut up now... lol Always, Laura

Paloma P

November 5, 2016 at 8:49 AM

Sorry for the late reply Laura, I don't seem to be getting my alerts. Drift all you want, thrilled by your review, truly,many thanks! :)

Laura Breidenthal

October 15, 2016 at 9:23 PM

I absolutely love your play on words, Paloma. I really like the alliterative "paraphrasing periphrases" bit. I also really love the word "circumlocution" - didn't know what it meant till I read this poem and looked it up. I think in the world of poetry - or at least on this website, we are really exposed to new ways of thinking-new scopes of perspective. There's a frustration sometimes that we cannot figure out a line or two of work...but thinking harder isn't necessarily a bad thing...

Paloma P

November 5, 2016 at 8:49 AM

You've got me smiling here. :)

Robert Warlov

October 9, 2016 at 6:39 PM

Mad Poetry: Best shizizle in town

Paloma P

November 5, 2016 at 8:47 AM

That made me smile, thanks Robert.

Stanley Carter

October 8, 2016 at 1:48 PM

Love it

Paloma P

October 8, 2016 at 2:15 PM

Thanks so much for your attentiveness.

Joseph P. DiMino

October 8, 2016 at 11:04 AM

But words are fun--a poet's playground. Older (old) now, I leave entire truth to their rightful owners--philosophers and the clergy, myself enjoying the occasional lie of behaving delightfully flawed. Another wonderful read! Thank you for sharing.

Paloma P

October 8, 2016 at 11:12 AM

Indubitably, or none of us would be here. Thank YOU for reading!

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