Infinity For Gareth

Wide open sky, space
Twinkling and winking, alive
God's morse code, listen

For Gareth's contest--Thanks for the inspiration!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Muzzey Avatar
April 18, 2010 at 10:03 AM
Congratulations on your win with a lovely write. I enjoyed the read. Caryl
Sweetheart Avatar
April 18, 2010 at 8:24 AM
Congrats Doris on your winning poem in Gareth's contest... great title for the Haiku and I am sure Gareth enjoyed it.. as u enjoy your wonderful win..luv.. Linda-Marie
Devonshire Avatar
April 18, 2010 at 5:47 AM
Very nice, Doris. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
April 12, 2010 at 12:24 PM
Enjoyed reading today Doris. Love, Carol
Fooksss Aka Lynette C. Avatar
April 12, 2010 at 11:23 AM
ITS ALIVE bUFfY. did u watch to see if it was a joke? lolz
Mehta Avatar
April 11, 2010 at 9:05 PM
A fine haiku with explicit images. Good luck
Byrne Avatar
April 11, 2010 at 5:01 PM
God's morse code? Divine code perhaps?
Murphy Avatar
April 11, 2010 at 1:35 PM
very nice Iam still trying to figure this one out you did a grest job with it good luck in the contest and thank you for your sweet comments faleshia
Kendrick Avatar
April 11, 2010 at 1:19 PM
This is a greatly inspired Haiku..Should be in the winner's circle...Keep the creative pen flowing..Mom
Sweetheart Avatar
April 11, 2010 at 1:14 PM
Great write Doris and good luck in Gareth's great contest... his photo is absolutely breathtaking...good luck with this perfect rendition of it..luv.. Linda-Marie..
Richards Avatar
April 11, 2010 at 1:04 PM
This should do very well!!! Love the twinkling and winking!! :)
Johnson Avatar
April 11, 2010 at 1:04 PM
Great Haiku. Good luck. Love, Joyce
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April 11, 2010 at 12:44 PM
Doris, I have no idea what "Haberdasher's Thoughts" is about. If I knew what I was writing when I write the first draft of a poem, I'd switch to prose. But since I spent many years as an editor and writer of the latter to earn a living, I'd just like to give my imagination free reign now and see what happens. Take care, Donal Donal
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