Infinity For Gareth

Wide open sky, space
Twinkling and winking, alive
God's morse code, listen

For Gareth's contest--Thanks for the inspiration!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 4/18/2010 10:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with a lovely write. I enjoyed the read. Caryl
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Date: 4/18/2010 8:24:00 AM
Congrats Doris on your winning poem in Gareth's contest... great title for the Haiku and I am sure Gareth enjoyed it.. as u enjoy your wonderful win..luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 4/18/2010 5:47:00 AM
Very nice, Doris. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/12/2010 12:24:00 PM
Enjoyed reading today Doris. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/12/2010 11:23:00 AM
ITS ALIVE bUFfY. did u watch to see if it was a joke? lolz
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Date: 4/11/2010 9:05:00 PM
A fine haiku with explicit images. Good luck
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Date: 4/11/2010 5:01:00 PM
God's morse code? Divine code perhaps?
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Date: 4/11/2010 1:35:00 PM
very nice Iam still trying to figure this one out you did a grest job with it good luck in the contest and thank you for your sweet comments faleshia
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Date: 4/11/2010 1:19:00 PM
This is a greatly inspired Haiku..Should be in the winner's circle...Keep the creative pen flowing..Mom
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Date: 4/11/2010 1:14:00 PM
Great write Doris and good luck in Gareth's great contest... his photo is absolutely breathtaking...good luck with this perfect rendition of it..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/11/2010 1:04:00 PM
This should do very well!!! Love the twinkling and winking!! :)
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Date: 4/11/2010 1:04:00 PM
Great Haiku. Good luck. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/11/2010 12:44:00 PM
Doris, I have no idea what "Haberdasher's Thoughts" is about. If I knew what I was writing when I write the first draft of a poem, I'd switch to prose. But since I spent many years as an editor and writer of the latter to earn a living, I'd just like to give my imagination free reign now and see what happens. Take care, Donal Donal
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