Infinity

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In the reflection of a golden sunset Nocturnal blessing of horizon’s vicinity Far from lamenting a plummeting nightfall I seem to capture a slight twinge of infinity In the midst of nostalgic reminiscings swirling Throughout roam thoughts of affinity Tacit conviction at a higher level Yonder awaits a reign of divinity AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted on December 9, 2018 for STANDARD CONTEST 145 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST Originally posted on August 11, 2018

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Edward Ibeh

Date: 12/14/2018 8:28:00 PM

Nicely done, Line!:-) Enjoyed. I see that you entered this for Savannah Brown's contest. I've completely forgotten I also submitted an entry for her contest, lol. It's been quite a while.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/14/2018 12:11:00 PM

When we look at the sky (or the sea), it is natural to ponder infinity and feel one with the universe, Line. Like Nina, I didn't even realize this is an acrostic until after I finished it, so this message carries a power of its own. Acrostics are not my favorite form, but this is a new favorite poem for me. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest!

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/14/2018 1:29:00 PM