Infinite

I climb the northern ridge to watch 
The lucent view of crystal sea, 
While dancing tides reflect the mist 
Atop the crown of ancient hills. 
And far below, the meadow bows
To praise One's infinite design, 
Now drawn across a moonlit eve . 
My spirit bursts with heaven's flare 

As winds embrace my inner glow.



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Contest of Rick Parise: Old or New Poem 10 Line Max
Re-entered  10.2.1016





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Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 3/19/2014 6:19:00 AM
Each line a beauty.
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Date: 1/10/2014 9:39:00 PM
Lovely, devotional poem. Congratulations.
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Date: 1/9/2014 7:50:00 PM
Nette, I have been reading many of these winners. all good, but I am reading yours one of my last ones and it truly deserved a number one spot. Congrats.
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Date: 1/8/2014 2:44:00 PM
congratulations! This is a very nice poem.
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Date: 1/8/2014 11:54:00 AM
congrats on win
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Date: 1/8/2014 10:40:00 AM
wow!! a very beautiful poem. a grand winner indeed!! Big Big congratulations on your win friend Nette. Happy New Year again. I just spend my Christmas and new year in Bangkok ;) cheers!! ;)
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Date: 1/8/2014 7:38:00 AM
A well deserved win Nette, I enjoyed your poem.....Hugs.....Roger
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Date: 1/8/2014 6:42:00 AM
wonderful write! Congrats on this well deserved win!
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Date: 1/8/2014 1:25:00 AM
Thanks for the entry and congratulations on fine win, nette
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Date: 12/24/2013 9:52:00 AM
A real cosmic view! good luck for the contest
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Date: 12/21/2013 2:33:00 AM
Vivid and embracing...humbling yet full of aspiration that the moment might be prolonged. I loved the culmination. Your poetry is magic.
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Date: 12/19/2013 11:09:00 AM
For a moment, I thought you were talking about my new Xbox "One". I'd have collapsed in nerd smiles if you were. But, I know you weren't. That said, utterly incredible & atmospheric writing. =)
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Date: 12/18/2013 7:28:00 PM
As One's infinite design this nature's message as expressed throughout your write is a glorious experience to see my friend! I really enjoyed reading this completely wondrous write here Nette! You surely have impressed me yet again with this fabulous poem! What a simply reverent piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 12/18/2013 4:22:00 PM
wow, simply awesome write here, Nette
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Date: 12/18/2013 3:17:00 PM
Wow what an interesting poem you wrote, I like it a lot! Great write Nette! Hugs :) xoxo
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Date: 12/18/2013 1:18:00 PM
Very Zen-like and soothing.This caught the omnipresence of things , beings with heavenly words. Thank you as well for my win in your contest.
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Date: 12/18/2013 12:19:00 PM
The opening verse drew me in making me want to read more.You explored the beauty of nature and the universe through eternal undertones. Another masterpiece, Nette.
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Date: 12/18/2013 12:05:00 PM
- A beautiful view ..... listening to the waves .... gulls ...... silence   --- : Peace - Beautiful Nette! - Have a nice day / night. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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