Inferno

Thanatos comes, Thanatos goes
Leaving me
But taking my love
Taking my freedom
Taking my identity
Leaving me riches beyond the imagination of Hades
But reaped me of all that I hold dear
Leaving me to grope for a hand that doesn’t let go
Leaving me falling forevermore
Taking my identity
But I will rise as a great fire
Raging across their perfection
Rid of the parasites of those brave enough
To stand up to their tyranny
But waves crash 
Overpowering the poor souls
Taking my identity 
Pressing them to liquify to become one with them
Who torture
Who embrace with a knife in hand
Taking my identity
Claiming they save
But perfection is what they crave
To rid the world of those with immunity
To their waves of loathing
Taking my identity
But I will rise
As a raging fire
That frees the imprisoned brave 
That frees the identities 
Imprisoned by the nymphs 
Phobos’ grip let free
Those of brave heart 
Phobos let free 
Those of intelligence
Trance of surrender set free
Raging fire 
Embrace them 
Imprison Fear
Melt the chains of Phobos
Of fear
Raging fire has overwhelmed me 
Set me free
Of my captors
That stole my identity
That enchanted me with their idea of perfection
Of justice
Of love
Of calm 
Raging fire
Burn away the shells of us 
That we have become at the tyranny of the water
Raging fire 
Freed
Calm that once enchanted 
Has been set to passion
A raging fire
Inferno 
Has set us free of their tyranny

Date: March 20th,2019
Contest: 'Intensity'
Sponsor: Julia Ward

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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