Infernal Night

WOW! i was really moved by this poem! It is truly beyond brilliant. Amzie

The value of human life so descriptively emdedded in this short yet rich write, doris... blown away! warmest, nette

Very inspirational write. Love it. Taha

Smile ~ But, now I have to "Pray" again for as I said, poes like these, make it so very hard...."My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Tomorrow 'Dear, Precious Doris Culverhouse;' Sweet Dreams!":) ~

Smile ~ "You" see, what such stirring poes can do for me "Dear, 'Lovely & Precious, Doris Culverhouse;'" they remind myself of the true cowardness of some &, paint anew as the psalmist once said, "Should I not hate those whom, hate You...." ~ "Psalm 69" ~ "Beautiful Poe Dear, 'Stirring The Soul Sooo, Very Deeply!!!'" ~ "Thank You" ~ ....Cont:)

Smile ~ Heavens eyes beheld; longing for the day that, is soon to be upon Us All now!!! ~ "Yes," reading these poes after poes day in & day out, I just want to put upon "My Lord & Kings Armour" as soon as I possibly can &, throw these flowers into the gutter where my own fleshs desires feel that they belong &, the day I die, will be but a blink of an eye from, my boiling bloods dreams come true; "Believe It!!!" ~ ....Cont:)

Smile ~ Bent upon their own soon to be it so seems, demise; these, proud & arrogant, stubborn, beast of burden & cruelties towards the weak & helpless children & infants, they so joyfully & heartlessly have slaughtered over century upon century as, they beat their chest like king kongs as if, they had done something great while as ~ ....Cont:)

Smile? ~ If "You" could feel how "My Blood Boils Inside" when I view these type of poes then "You" would know why, I find it sooo very hard to perform the possible purpose given unto me; why, I find myself as Jonah, running away as I long for the day that burns inside of sooo many such as myself and yet, "I Pray to 'My Beautiful Father' In Heaven Always" to, forgive me & to help me understand &, fill me with "His Beautiful Love," that I may endure amid this blind ~ ....Cont:)

Very strong write Doris. I see a ring of truism in this. Charles

Hi Doris Strong content.I felt it was like watching a weepie movie hoping that it would not end in tragedy,but it invariably does as in life.Although it was a sad and brutal portayal of reality I liked it because of how you wrote it,especially the last line.All of it touched me. luv June

Such a frightening thought....and yet it does happen. We should help in any way we can. No ...we can't look away.

Nice wite Doris, as always love Michael

Very inspirational and emotional write, Doris

eeeeeeeek ! The sad truth dear poet....the sad truth. So we help the children in need....we become the crier... LOUD... when we see them bleed ! Much love, james

Great inspired write..I just loved the child from the first time I heard that his mom wanted to give him up...I am glad that you wrote this one..Mom