Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Rhyme

Infectious - a Collab

You liked me at first with your mind 
Criss-crossing hugs, our thoughts entwine 
Infectious charm shattered my sense 
Droplets hit, crumbling my defense 
Sparks alarm, ringing intense

Followed by drum thumping heart
I'm on a new road that seems right 
Contained by our vows so pure 
My world lights in brighter hues 
Contagious, with the love I found in you

It was more than my mind that thought 
You caught my eye, infectious onslaught
This meeting of us, never by chance 
Our defenses drop heading romance
Your hand clasp in mine, tango, our dance 

Chest to chest, they pound a raw debut 
two Paths in our lives have chosen anew 
Entertained, now drained we retire 
On silken sheets,spooned fuse,we perspire 
Contented, we sleep in naked attire

(c) Olive Eloisa and James Fraser
9:35pm
September 21, 2014

Sponsor	Poet Destroyer A 
Contest Name	A poem you have not entered in a contest # 13 
Placed 4th


** thank you Mr. James.. :)

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Kayod5 Kayode January 2, 2015 at 3:52 AM Nice one, congrats Olive ...huggs

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty January 2, 2015 at 1:58 AM Congrats on WIN Olive-rajat

Poet Destroyer A January 1, 2015 at 6:54 PM OLIVE, thank you for supporting one of the many, contest I ran last year. Dropping by to say hi in hopes you are enjoying the first day of 2015 :) :) Stop by my latest blog "You Call This Poetry" if you'd like. Enjoy the win, I sure did. Love Linda

Jan Allison January 1, 2015 at 6:49 PM Dropping back with my congrats Olive and James:-) Hugs Jan xxx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 4, 2015 at 6:27 AM thanks much JAn,.. :)!

Poet Destroyer A September 25, 2014 at 7:02 PM thank you for the comment on my comment

Justin Bordner September 24, 2014 at 8:31 PM Hearts of beautiful balance, passion bridging mind and body, personality and pulse. " Chest to chest they pound a raw debut..." this poem illustrates a beautiful moment of love shared Olive...J.A.B. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 25, 2014 at 7:06 AM Thanks much Justine for the generous comments..:) GBU

Poet Destroyer A September 23, 2014 at 8:36 PM SO Nice, and I bet it was awesome working a poem with Mr James... Love Linda Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 25, 2014 at 7:06 AM Yes it is Lollie Linda..:) weeee..:) looking forward to a new poem..:)

Paul Callus September 21, 2014 at 3:36 PM Well done to the both of you, Olive_eloi and James! Romantic and some more....paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 23, 2014 at 1:19 AM Thank you Paul..:) GBU

Liam Mcdaid September 21, 2014 at 2:51 PM very beautifully penned with such grace Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 22, 2014 at 7:10 PM :) thanks..:)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 21, 2014 at 10:34 AM Splendid work both of you dear Olive! Love the last stanza the most,, very expressive! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 22, 2014 at 7:09 PM Thanks much Dr. Upma..:) I appreciate it..:)

James Fraser September 21, 2014 at 9:58 AM Thank you once again Olive for being part of another collab. There are so many topics, subjects to write about and I look forward to writing more with you, James :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 21, 2014 at 7:38 PM yes, looking forward too.. :D! thanks much as well.. :D

Tim Smith September 21, 2014 at 9:54 AM I like where you guys took this....very sensual....love it Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 21, 2014 at 7:37 PM Tim thanks much.. :D

Casarah Nance September 21, 2014 at 9:47 AM Oooh that is sexy, hot, and sweeet. Loved it you two! beautiful write :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 21, 2014 at 7:37 PM thanks much Cassie... somehow I didn't mean to end it like that though.. :D

Jan Allison September 21, 2014 at 9:21 AM oooh how sensual the final stanza is my friends - wonderful collaboration by two outstanding talented poets - its a 7 from me:-) hugs Jan xxx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 21, 2014 at 7:21 PM thanks much Jan.. :) weeeeeee, just we tried.. :D