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Inenarrable

Some days drip synchonicity -
a white strip of sand, an emerald sea
gulls and wind and walking into heat
slapping the wet beach with our feet
feeling them  cooled by rhythmic waves
people crowding under colored umbrellas
happy chatter and harmonic peace
yet over all- inenarrable.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Cantu Avatar
May 22, 2023 at 11:51 AM
You’ve described the indescribable very well. I like, “Some days drip synchronicity.” Cheers!
Delaney Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 1:49 PM
Hi Ann: Thanks so much for reading. I haven’t been writing much lately but will be over to visit your poems soon. Getting ready for company here soon. Happy Sunday, SuZ
Baker Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 2:40 PM
Great imagery and a good way to use inenarrable, SuZ. It is a wonderous and mystical feeling, my friend. Have a great weekend! Bill
Delaney Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 3:49 PM
Hi Bill: So happy you liked my poem. Hope your weekend is enjoyable. WE are meeting friends at our favorite Mexican place. SuZ
Turner Avatar
May 13, 2023 at 9:39 AM
like, sitting on a rock bluff overlooking miles and miles of nothing but green trees and mountains , listening to the birds and the wind and trying to figure out where you fit in, why are you here? I know that feeling! Makes me feel very "small". Have a wonderful Mother's Day weekend sweet lady:)
Delaney Avatar
May 13, 2023 at 1:35 PM
Thanks Daniel: We went and had a lovely seafood lunch overlooking the water. Yes the mountains give their own kind of enannarable feeling. Hope you had a nice Sunday. SuZ
Andresen Avatar
May 10, 2023 at 4:01 AM
- A gem...love the sound of this poem, SuZ :) - hugs
Delaney Avatar
May 13, 2023 at 1:31 PM
Thanks AnneLise: I was sure I typed a reply and then it disappeared. Thanks for reading and commenting. Happy Mothers’ Day
Wolf Avatar
May 9, 2023 at 11:37 PM
That sure is a fun word, Suzanne... only your poem is very enarrable! Methinks, Wink-Wink
Delaney Avatar
May 10, 2023 at 2:41 AM
Oh thanks Gershon: I am glad you enjoyed the word I found. That’s a fun index to browse. .I find on a beach walk, every sense to coma alive. Best, SuZ
Willason Avatar
May 9, 2023 at 9:18 PM
Drank this poem in, Suzanne, gorgeous...the images just form in the mind so easily. A case of when everything comes alive. I am not sure about the "inenarrable", you seem to have done a splendid job in capturing the essence.
Delaney Avatar
May 10, 2023 at 2:44 AM
Yes, Paul: The beach has a way of filling every sense and at the same time healing. Thanks for the kind feedback. SuZ
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