Indonesia Is Closer Today

Indonesia is so far away.
I may not have ever met anyone from there.
Yet my heart is there right now, feeling sad, feeling empathy.
That so many people are hurting because of Friday’s tsunami.
Everything swiftly changing in a red minute,
A reminder to the rest of the world to hold every second of every day
As tightly as we can, cherishing the good, appreciating it for all it is worth.
Someone else’s sorrow is a heavenly reminder to us, the ones unscathed,
To love our love ones as much as we can every second because life is
Elusive, taken away suddenly, slipping off the edge of time in a whispery second.
When we take a deep breath or look away for a second, everything changes.
Indonesia seems closer than ever to me today.
I am praying for you, Indonesia.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Mcferran Avatar
September 30, 2018 at 7:25 PM
Empathy does seem to 'draw us closer' during times of tragedy... no matter distance or difference in cultures. Touching and well written piece, my friend.
Krutsinger Avatar
September 30, 2018 at 9:48 PM
Thank you Rhona. I cannot get them out of my head!
Kiser Avatar
September 30, 2018 at 2:04 PM
Indonesia seems to have had more than its share of natural disasters in the past decade. Everyone's mother, father, brother, sister, friend, neighbor, etc., is someone precious to someone else; the world feels the loss. Well penned.
Krutsinger Avatar
September 30, 2018 at 4:19 PM
I do feel so sad about them today.
Gauthier Avatar
September 30, 2018 at 9:11 AM
Lovely poem of compassion, Caren. Well expressed and shared.
Krutsinger Avatar
September 30, 2018 at 4:19 PM
Thank you Line. I would go over there and help if I was retired.
Bangalee Avatar
September 30, 2018 at 4:08 AM
lend me sorrow, only it i can borrow. none and nothing are the biggest than humanity
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